Topic: Sierra Hazlewood - Approved [S]

[Sierra Hazlewood]

First and Last Name: Sierra Hecate Hazlewood

 Bloodline: Pureblood

Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Hazel
General Build: Petite
Height: Average
Birthplace: Little Hangleton, England

Brief Childhood History:
Sierra Hazlewood was born in Little Hangleton in the bedroom of her parents, Eliza Hazlewood (nee Luther) and Alexander Hazlewood on 4th November. She's been on the waiting list for Hogwarts since two days after her birth. She, as a proud pureblood, was raised into the magical world. She loved, sketching, painting and was a great quiddich fan, as well as being extremely clever. As well as all the good stuff, Sierra has always been very sharp-tounged and unkind, especially to muggles living near her.

Before Hogwarts, she had a best friend, Primrose, the child of a wizard couple living near her. They played every day and enjoyed taking trips into Diagon Alley as little kids, amazed at the things in the shop windows. Just before, Sierra went to buy her first wand and prepare for Hogwarts, Primrose left to go to France because of her father's new job. She became more moody than ever and mostly locked herself in her green and silvver decorated bedroom

Strengths: Sierra always stands up for what she believes in, always perseveres and is very witty and ambitious, she is brilliant at art and a potioneer in the making

Weaknesses: Sierra is very sharp-tounged and unkind to certain people (especially Muggle-borns). She is terrible at COMC because she doesn't understand animals except her kitten.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Sierra is ambitious and cunning, the ideal Slytherin (like all her descendants), but is also clever and witty, like a Ravenclaw. Despite this, she's probably more Slytherin.

[Jayce]

Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can get you sorted, there are a few things to attend to.

In an effort to keep all the sheets clean and uniform, I'm going to have to stress that your entries for each particular section only pertain the necessary information. So 'Bloodline' should just say 'Pureblood', 'Hair Color' should be 'blonde', and 'Birthplace' should just be a city and country, at most. You will also need to use one of the three adjectives provided for you on the Official Character Sheet to fill in the 'general build' and 'height' sections.

While it's true that we ask for a brief childhood history, the official sheet also states that we require at least a solid 2-3 paragraphs. So go ahead and tell us a bit more about Sierra. Some areas you could expand on are her prior schooling, childhood friends, relationship with her parents, etc.

And finally, you seem to have placed Sierra's academic weakness in the strengths section and haven't named an academic strength.

Once you've fixed all of that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

[Jayce]

Unfortunately, you still need to use one of the three provided adjectives on the Official Character Sheet in the 'height' section. Just swap the title again when you've done that.

[Jayce]