Topic: Mia Moss - Pending

[Mia Moss]

First and Last Name: Mia Moss
Bloodline: pureblood
Hair Color: platinum blond
Eye Color: green
General Build: average
Height: average
Birthplace: London, England

Brief Childhood History:
Mia was born and raised in pure blood, rich family where she had everything she could wish for.
The only thing that was missing was the love of her parents.
Her father worked as Auror in the Ministry of Magic, so he was absent most of her childhood.
Neither the mother was't any better; all she ever thinks is clothes, shoes, love potions and spending her days searching for the next lover.
Nanny Penelope is the only parental figure that Mia had in her life and the only person that knew real her.
She didn't needed nobody to say to her that she is a witch - she knew that and  Hogwarts acceptance letter were just matter of time.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic):
She is very strong-willed, independent and ambitious perfectionist.
She'll be great in Transfiguration, Divination, Charms and Defence Against the Dark Arts

Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic):
Mostly she is cold and evil, at the times hard to handle.
Closes the doors for everyone who's trying to get to know her, but once when she opens that same door she becomes warm, caring and loyal friend.
Academically; Arithmancy and Ancient Runes are her weak points.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:
Without any doubt Mia belongs in Slytherin, although it wouldn't be so bad for her if she end up in Ravenclaw because of her artistic skills and wisdom.

[Tany]

Heya Mia and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, we're going to have to ask that you give us a bit more into her history and write it in paragraph form without the continued spacing between sentences. :3 We're looking for more about Mia, mind, so while the information about her seemingly neglectful parents and nanny are nice fillers, we still want the majority to be about how Mia grew up and how her childhood was.

Additionally, with the strengths and weaknesses, make those paragraphs as well. Perhaps even give us some why behind them? Why is she strong-willed, independent, ambitious, and a perfectionist? Why is the cold, and evil, and hard to handle? Do you think 'evil' might be too big a word for an eleven year old girl? ;3

Lastly, we need a reason why she belongs in Slytherin. You gave us a reason for Ravenclaw, but... well, we need one for the house you're chosing, too. <3

Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.