Topic: Mia Gilbert - Approved [H]

[Mia Gilbert]

First and Last Name:Mia Gilbert
Bloodline: Half blood
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
General Build: Average
Height: Average
Birthplace: London

Brief Childhood History: She was born in South London, and lives with her parents. Her mum is a muggle and her dad is a wizard. Her parents are very supportive of her. She enjoys school, visiting new places and being surrounded by people. Also she loves burying her head into a good book. She was sent to an all girls school prior to Hogwarts and would really enjoy helping other people in anyway she can. She feels that she always has to be doing something otherwise she feels useless.

She gets on really well with her dad as they have similar interests and likes and they both enjoy making things together. When she was preparing for Hogwarts it was her dad who mainly helped her through it and he was always there for her when she needed help. He was her best friend throughout her childhood besides Taylor, a girl who also had magic abilities who went to her school.

Strengths: she is good at calming a situation because she listens to everyones opinion and will do her best to help, she is very bubbly and happy, she enjoys potions, herbology and defence against the dark arts.
Weaknesses: she is quite a loud person which means she may end up saying something she does not mean to say,does not enjoy flying lessons and Charms classes.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I think my character belongs in Hufflepuff  because she is very just and loyal, she is hard working and very honest about things. she would be good to have around in Hufflepuff.

[Tany]

Heya Mia and welcome to HPRPG~!

First and foremost, although I've changed it for you, keep in mind that you ought to have titled the sheet with your character's name. :3 Most tutorials you go through on the site and things of that nature will also require the title to be your character's name, rather than the name of the form in question. <3

Onto the sheet! I feel you've got a really good basic outline right now, but I'd actually like a bit more- I don't feel we learn too much about Mia in her history aside from her love of visiting places and reading-- could you give us a bit more into her childhood? What sort of things did she do for fun; did she have any friends; maybe why her parents had her attend a public school (or private?) prior to Hogwarts, since one of her parents is magical...?

Same with her strengths and weaknesses-- why is she good at being calm in 'situations', why is being loud a weakness, and so on. Give us some insight to the strengths and weaknesses you chose for Mia.

Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

[Tany]

Thank you for editing~!

Unfortunately, Gryffindor house is currently closed, so we're going to go ahead and pop Mia on the waiting list. If, at any time during your wait, you feel you can see Mia in another house feel free to edit your sheet accordingly and poke us here.

[Mia Gilbert]

Hi I have de decided that my charater would also be good in Hufflepuff. Thanks

[Tany]

-thumbs up-

Sounds great-- but your 'which house and why' reasons for Hufflepuff are the same reasons you thought she'd do well in Gryffindor and don't really suit Hufflepuff. <3 Make sure you edit it so it fits the house in question, rather than just changing the house name.

Just swap the title once you've done so.

[Mia Gilbert]

oh...sorry. hope it is ok now.

[Tany]