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Offline Jude Rask

Jude Rask - Denied
« on: 26 Jan 2012, 05:39 am »
First and Last Name: Jude Rask

Bloodline: Halfblood
Hair Color: Dark brown
Eye Color: Shades of blue
General Build: Average
Height: Average

Birthplace: Liverpool, England
Brief Childhood History: Jude Rask was born a poor Liverpool muggle, on a cold evening of December 31st. His mother was a single mom and he had a younger brother, born two years after him. Everything went ok, considering everything that the Rasks had to put up with, until a shooting went down on their neighborhood and Jude’s mother and brother died tragically when he was only ten years old. Fortunately, Jude managed to escape, although even he couldn’t find out how.
He wondered lonely for about half a year, starving and freezing on the streets of the poor neighborhood where his life began, trying to figure out how to survive on his own. He did very good, in fact, for a ten-tear-old, but by the end of the seventh month some weird-looking man said he had been looking for him. Later he found out that the man was a wizard and so was he, when he was brought to this place called the Leaky Cauldron and listened to his life story. The so called “wizards” told him he had an uncle and that he had to move in with him.
So, here’s that story: his father was a Scottish wizard with an uncontrollable desire for muggle women. He lived in London and one day, on one of his lonely trips around Europe, his eyes met Jude’s mother. He found she was beautiful and never ever would imagine that nine months later that one night fling a baby would come to the world with his wizard blood. Well, he never even knew about it, died some years later on a duel, but he left all his money and mansion to his younger brother Samwise. And now, ten years after that fling, Samwise found himself with a kid.
Jude started to live with his uncle and they soon bonded to each other.
After one year of discovering the admirable wizard world Jude received a letter from a place called Hogwarts. He already knew about it; proud as he was to know that he was a wizard, a special someone, he spent the entire year asking his uncle about magic things.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Transfiguration, potions, flying and he is a strong boy. He is also very cunning and very good at curses.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Divination, history of magic and care of magical creatures. He is not so smart and very disorganized.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Jude is a native Slytherin because, although he is a halfblood (Snape was one too) and was born poor, he became a street kid and managed to survive using nothing but his cunningness and will to succeed and survive (two of the natural Slytherin values). He is also very proud to be wizard and has an altive air.
« Last Edit: 19 Feb 2012, 04:05 pm by Jayce »

Offline Jayce

Re: Jude Rask
« Reply #1 on: 27 Jan 2012, 11:59 am »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can sort you, there are just a few things to attend to.

We'll need you to remove the mentions of the shootings. It's a bit too descriptive and violent for our board, but if you keep the cause of their death a bit more vague, everything should be fine. ;) In addition, please try and expand a bit more on what you have already given us in the strengths and weaknesses. Such as, explaining to us why Jude has those characteristics.

Once you've done that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Jude Rask - Pending
« Reply #2 on: 19 Feb 2012, 04:05 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski