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Aria Davidson - Denied
« on: 26 Jan 2012, 12:33 am »
First and Last Name: Aria Davidson

Bloodline: Muggle-born
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Dark Blue
General Build: Ruler/Flat body, average weight
Height: 163 CM

Birthplace: London
Brief Childhood History: Aria doesn't have mother, and her father is too busy to raise her at all. Before being accepted to Hogwarts, Aria lived with her aunt in the countryside of England, which has been her home ever since she was seven. She doesn't really have a good relationship with her father and may never will.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Aria likes to play Muggle-sports, but has no interest in participating in Quidditch at all. She also has a strong personality and will stick to her own decisions to the end. She is interested in the Dark Arts and Transfiguration and spends her own time practicing the spells that she was taught.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Aria has a fear for heights, even though she doesn't know it. She fails miserably at Potions and she can be quite stubborn at times.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I think Aria would be more suitable in Hufflepuff. She isn't brave and strong to be in Griffyndor and not wise and smart to be in Ravenclaw, but she isn't pure like the ones in Slytherin. Therefore, I think Aria would be more suitable in Hufflepuff.
« Last Edit: 19 Feb 2012, 04:05 pm by Jayce »

Offline Jayce

Re: Aria Davidson
« Reply #1 on: 26 Jan 2012, 05:00 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can sort you, there are a few things to attend to.

Please change the general build and height sections so that you're using one of the three adjectives provided for you on the official sheet. We also require a solid 2-3 paragraphs for the history section, so you will have to expand more on what you have currently. Perhaps talk about Aria's childhood friends or prior schooling?

Once you've done that, just change your title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Aria Davidson - Pending
« Reply #2 on: 19 Feb 2012, 04:04 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski