Author Topic: Heather Black - Approved [G]  (Read 790 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Heather Black - Approved [G]
« on: 23 Jan 2012, 05:24 am »
First and Last Name: Heather Black

Bloodline: Half-Blood
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
General Build: Petite
Height: Short

Birthplace: London, UK
Brief Childhood History: Heather was born and raised in London, living with her mum and daddy, and her little sister Kristen. They took her to the zoo a lot, and her mum taught her about the magical world. Of course she didn't tell her daughter the bad parts, but what mother would? Over all, she lived a pretty average childhood, counting being a witch as average. She played and explored, learned and made mistakes. She broke her wrist when she was 4, convinced she could fly. Before attending Hogwarts she went to a public school in her town. She did well in most classes, except for math. She got average marks in that class. She also failed Gym because she was too short to lift herself for chin-ups, and protested doing them. In her school years she had a group of certain friends she was always with, and they were her partners in crime as well. Tori, James, Zak, Izzy, and PJ. She has known them since she was just a baby, and they always seem to be in the mix of things when she gets in trouble.

Strengths: In personality her strengths go wild. She is very nice, curious, and typical little kid snoopy sometimes. She likes to make friends and get to know her world around her. She also has a bravery about her. In school, her strengths are Herbology and Astronomy.
Weaknesses: Of course having strength means to balance it with weakness. Because of her curious nature, she also tends to get herself into predicaments at times. She has a fiery temper when pushed to her limits, and will tell someone such. In school, her weaknesses are Potions and Defense Against Dark Arts.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I feel like Heather would do well in Gryffindor. She's brave, doesn't look before she leaps, is a bit arrogant at times, and cocky. She has attitude, but isn't all out evil like Slytherin, isn't all truth worthy like Huffkepuff, isn't nerdy like Ravenclaw.. She's most fit for the house of bravery. The lion.



((Please let me know if anything needs fixed. This was submitted on my iPhone.))
« Last Edit: 07 Feb 2012, 09:34 pm by Jayce »
"So what if you can see, the darkest side of me.. No one will ever change this animal I have become." -Three Days Grace

Offline Tany

Re: Heather Black
« Reply #1 on: 23 Jan 2012, 03:19 pm »
Heya Heather and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need editing/expanding. First, could you give us a bit more childhood history to Heather? What sort of things did she do for fun, did she attend a school prior to Hogwarts, did she have any friends? That sort of thing. ^^ Additionally, there's a random mention of a 'Brooke' breaking her wrist- I'm not sure if you meant 'Heather', but... yeah. ^^; <3

Secondly, could you use one of the three given adjectives on the sheet for her 'general build' and 'height' rather than specific measurements?

Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

Re: Heather Black - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 23 Jan 2012, 06:27 pm »
Ok, I edited my form. :)
"So what if you can see, the darkest side of me.. No one will ever change this animal I have become." -Three Days Grace

Offline Tany

Re: Heather Black - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 24 Jan 2012, 07:59 pm »
Thank you for editing~!

One more small thing-- in 'which house your character belongs in and why' you have information that would better serve in Heather's weaknesses. In that category we're looking for an acknowledgement of which traits Heather has that would suit her for the house of your choosing. :3

You know the drill with the title. :biglove:

Re: Heather Black - Edited
« Reply #4 on: 24 Jan 2012, 09:19 pm »
Ok, edited it again. :P that was an error in my iPhone's copy and paste lol.
"So what if you can see, the darkest side of me.. No one will ever change this animal I have become." -Three Days Grace

Offline Jayce

Re: Heather Black - Edited
« Reply #5 on: 26 Jan 2012, 04:50 pm »
Hi there! Thank you for editing and I promise you're almost done, but I will need you to go back and edit in some proper reasons as to why Heather would fare well in Hufflepuff. Unfortunately, being fluttery and liking sweets aren't really Hufflepuff traits. :lol: So keep in mind the badger characteristics — loyalty, hard-working, non-judgmental, friendly, honest — and explain how one or two of them correspond with Heather.

Once you're done with that, just swap the title again!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Re: Heather Black - Edited
« Reply #6 on: 26 Jan 2012, 08:05 pm »
Haha, ok. XD Edited again.
"So what if you can see, the darkest side of me.. No one will ever change this animal I have become." -Three Days Grace

Offline Jayce

Re: Heather Black - Edited
« Reply #7 on: 29 Jan 2012, 02:27 pm »
Gryffindor house is currently closed at the moment. You will be placed on the waiting list, but if at any point you decide you would like your character to be in another house, just edit the sheet accordingly and reply here.

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Heather Black - Waiting [G-1]
« Reply #8 on: 07 Feb 2012, 09:33 pm »
:approvedg:

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski