Topic: Skylark Cloud- Denied

[Skylark Cloud]

First and Last Name: Skylark Cloud
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Bloodline: Halfblood
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Pthalo blue
General Build: petite
Height: Average
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Birthplace: London, England
Brief Childhood History: Skylark was born in a rather rich family, she lived in a fancy house along with her pureblood father, stepmum and two older brothers.

When Skylark was 6, she witnessed her dad and oldest brother torture her mother to death. Since then, Skylark has put up a wall between herself and others, she never laughed, smiled or joked. Whenever she is spoken to, she always give a short reply and ignore the person afterwards. Skylark is almost never seen with anyone, even when she is, she acts like the person is not there. Many said Skylark is like a drifting cloud, the way she can not be held down by anything or get caught.

Skylark was not surprised when she received her letter, since she already read about Hogwarts in the books her stepmum gave her, she is determined to be the best student in Hogwarts, which will be not hard to achieve since she has an IQ of 127.
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Strengths (At least three, including Personality and Academic): Because of her cold personality, Skylark can not be moved easily, she is also very loyal to people who managed to gain her respect. She is also a fast learner, being able to memorize 3 books in 2 weeks. Skylark has shown strong interest in Charms, Potions and Transfiguration.
Weaknesses (At least three, including Personality and Academic): Because Skylark is a rather cold person, when someone angers her, she snaps and can not control her actions, which might end up killing the person. Since she hates being restrained, she often gets in trouble for breaking rules. A rare trait about her is her love for small animals, ranging from birds to hedgehogs, which can be used against her. Academically her weaknesses are divination and Muggle studies, finding them both rather boring and is a waste of time.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I believe Skylark belongs in Ravenclaw. Even though it takes a while to see how intelligent it is because of her distant personality, but it soon becomes obvious that she's somewhat of a genius, her strong desire in learning also makes her a worthy Ravenclaw.

[Sue]

Hi and welcome to hprpg

There's just a few things we need to address before we can continue with the sorting. First of all, just 'blue' is fine for the eye color. xD We're aware people have different shades of blue for eyes, but we insist that they're natural, human colors. So just 'blue' works fine!

Also, the idea of children being witness to torture and murder is a bit of an intense concept for the lighthearted and family friendly atmosphere of hprpg. We know bad stuff happens in life, but this is a game, and we like to keep things light and fun. You're welcome to have it in Skylark's history that her brother and father passed away tragically, but leave out the details please~

Additionally, it's a bit unrealistic to say that she will be the smartest student at Hogwarts, and also somewhat leaning toward godmodding since you can't really declare that she's definitely smarter than the other characters here.  She can think that, though, for sure~ And keep in mind that the average IQ for an 11 year old is 100. A little above that would be acceptable but... Just keep in mind that wizards are still human, they just have the ability to do magic.  Same goes for the part about being able to memorize books. That's a little beyond the realm of realistic. xD

Once you've made your changes, please switch your subject line from 'pending' to 'edited'

[Jayce]

As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes!