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Elizabeth Tregonning - Denied
« on: 16 Jan 2012, 05:18 am »
Bloodline:Melbourne
Hair Colour:Red
Eye ColourGreen
General Build:Average
Height:Short
Birthplace:Cork Ireland


Brief Childhood History:
Elizabeth Tronning was born to Smuggle parents, Shaun and Josephine  Tronning, along with her older brother Matthew.Like most smuggle children she attended a normal smuggle primary school. However she felt left out because a lot of the kids thought she was strange, she would often be bullied. However she gotten use to the idea of being alone and would often spend playtime reading books or drawing pictures of her surroundings from slugs to birds or even other kids and teachers sometimes.

As Elizabeth's interest for literature and art grew she discovered a new hobby. She devoted her time to playing the violin. Taught by her music teacher who was her favorite. She spent hours praticing at home when not at school. She suddenly saw potential in herself when it came to music and realized she wanted to be a classical musician.

 Until one summer after she left primary school a small little owl appeared on her bedroom window whilst she was trying to read. She opened the window because she thought the poor thing was lost, she notice the little owl held an envelope in its mouth. She opened it to see what it was about. The letter was addressed to her claiming to invite her to a "witches and wizards school" named "Hogwarts". Elizabeth rushed down to show her parents to see if they know anything about it. Unfortunately they didn't either. Her father Shaun scratched his head confused. A week later a gentleman in strange clothing appeared at their doorstep. The Reckonings invited him in, he claimed to be working for  the ministry of magic and that Elizabeth has been accepted at Hogwarts. Elizabeth and her parents were a bit apprehensive at first to accept that Elizabeth could train at this Hogwarts school to become a witch. Then suddenly Elizabeth realized that she might have potential  to be a witch, sure they lacked magic know but she was  a quick learning and her thirst for knowledge of Hogwarts and the world of magic grew, her parents refused at first because they thought the whole idea was ludicrous and they shouldn't have trusted that strange man. But after some pursuing by Elizabeth they gave in and had no choice but to let her go to Hogwarts.


Strengths (Including Personality and Academic):
Elizabeth is a kind hearted girl with a sweet nature. Although her sense of humor is often considered dark according to her parents. She enjoys music,art and considers herself to be a bit of a bookworm. She thrives in an education environment despite the fact she was constantly bullied at school.She isn't always serious as she does daydream an awful lot,often getting her head in the clouds, which does get her in trouble with her teachers and parents. She hasn't got Lot of friends but doesn't act all down in the dumps about her situation she enjoys helping others in their in trouble. Bubbly and warm, her family mean lot to her and had a strong relationship with her father, her mother calls her a daddy's girl but Elizabeth loves everyone in her family.

Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic):Elizabeth has many flaws. One of them is perfectionism, if something isn't right weather it'll be her homework, her hair, her paintings or her violin practices she'll stop at nothing to achieve her goals and perfect them. She often has a bad temper which causes her to lash out at her bullies and it always leads to a fight and landing herself into trouble with her teachers/parents. Elizabeth can be shy at times too, which can cause great difficulty when she's in a playground. She has a hard time making friends in her primary school as lot of kids thought she was odd. She is also highly opinionated and often says what she thinks, lot of people are offended by her honesty.
She also hates physical activity like football or basketball. She dreads PE lessons and isn't competitive like the rest of her class. She often picked last in the rounders team or never picked at all and often makes any excuse up, like she's ill or doctors appointment not to attend a PE class. Mostly because she isn't talented at sports and doesn't share an interest with sports like her peers do, she often falls over playing football or basketball.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: As she is inquisitive and has a thirst for knowledge. I think Elizabeth would be perfect for Ravenclaw, not only is she clever, she is also curious of the world surrounding her including Hogwarts. Elizabeth loves to challenge herself and get things right. She would love to progress her skills and further herself in terms of magic as she gains interest in something she wants to discover more about it.
« Last Edit: 05 Feb 2012, 12:35 pm by Jayce »

Offline Jayce

Re: Elizabeth Tregonning
« Reply #1 on: 17 Jan 2012, 05:56 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can sort you though, there are just a few things to attend to.

Please first use the Official Character Sheet provided for you. You are currently missing one part of it. ;) I think you also meant to put 'Muggle born' in the Bloodline instead of 'Melbourne'. The term muggle also seems to have been auto-correct to 'smuggle' in the history section as well. :lol:

You will also need to provide academic strengths and weaknesses in the form the actual Hogwarts classes.

Once you've done that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Elizabeth Tregonning - Pending
« Reply #2 on: 05 Feb 2012, 12:35 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski