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Offline Sapphire Creekman

Sapphire Creekman- Denied
« on: 07 Jan 2012, 05:45 pm »
First And Last Name: Sapphire Creekman

Hair Color: Dark blonde, in a ponytail

Eye Color: Grayish-blue

General Build: Petite

Height: Small

Birthplace: London

Personality: Kind and gentle,very brave a faithful until the end.She also has a feisty side..

Bloodline: Halfblood

Information Sapphire lives in a small London estate, and also owns a small horse farm nearby. She has three horses: Captain, Kitty, and Skylark, and lives with her aunt. She has a Doberman Pinscher dog too, named Spike. She rescued him from a cruel fox trap and nursed him back to health.She is wondering if she can take Spike with her to Hogwarts, as Spike is her best friend. She promises that Spike will not harm anyone, and is fully trained. She eagerly waits for her place here. :)
Brief Childhood:  As for her younger days, Sapphire would eagerly take care of the horses at her estate farm. But she often noticed that the horses, what ever command she gave them, would actually do as she said. Her aunt saw that she could have the gift of her grandparents, because they also went to Hogwarts and communicated with magical creatures.When she was of age, Sapphire had gotten a letter from Hogwarts to tell her that she was elgible to go.

 No one knows exactly what happened to her parents.Even Sapphire's aunt does not understand what happened.She works at an equestrian center nowadays (not the one they live on.) The last place Sapphire believes her parents resided was at the Ministry of Magic. However, she feels that her parents might come someday, back into her life. But for now, she has all the animal friends she could have.

Strengths: In personality, kindness and gentlenness toward creatures of all sizes, caring for them when they need it most.She also has a strong sense of humor. The academic strenghts would be, you guessed it, Care of Magical Creatures.And..maybe Potions(healing remedies for animals).Transfiguration could might as well be her favorite,too. Charms is another strenghth.

Weaknesses: In weaknesses, Sapphire does find it hard to control her temper around teasing bullies.She also can't help but do her homework right away, when she has the chance.She gets anxiety attacks when something horrible happens,too.After that, it's very hard to calm her down. In academic circumstances,Divination(quite too dramatic and somewhat boring),Arithmacy(math?No way!), and Astronomy(very complicated stars..) might be a challenge for her.

What House You Believe Your Character Should Be In And Why: I believe Sapphire should be in Gryffindor.The reason being that she is loyal to anyone like her parents or an adult.She would never betray anyone whom she feels safe with. Sapphire is also very brave, considering how many times she has been in a dark basement for longer than an hour at times. These are the qualities that puts a tudent in Gryffindor.Besides, her grandparents were in Gryffindor, too.
« Last Edit: 05 Feb 2012, 12:36 pm by Jayce »
Sapphire

Offline Sue

Re: Sapphire Creekman- Waiting
« Reply #1 on: 07 Jan 2012, 06:48 pm »
Hi and welcome to hprpg :D

Before we can do annnnything else, we need you to head over to the Join section that's linked up in the top menu and find the *~Official~* HPRPG character sheet. :D You can edit your post and fill it out properly, and we'll be able to carry on with the sorting.

When you've finished, you can switch your subject line from 'pending' to 'edited.' Make sure you have a look at the rules as well~. Very important!

all my love for Tany

Offline Jayce

Re: Sapphire Creekman- Edited
« Reply #2 on: 08 Jan 2012, 09:06 pm »
Hi there!

Unfortunately, you're still not using the Official Character Sheet. It's probably just easiest if you copy and paste the coding we provide for you on the Official Character Sheet page. ;)

Once you've done that, just swap the title again!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Sapphire Creekman

Re: Sapphire Creekman- Pending
« Reply #3 on: 17 Jan 2012, 11:57 am »
I believe I fixed it. I hope you'll like it, I LOVE roleplay and Harry Potter. Also, can I keep the Info part on my sorting sheet? Thanks. =)
Sapphire

Offline Jayce

Re: Sapphire Creekman- Pending
« Reply #4 on: 17 Jan 2012, 06:14 pm »
Unfortunately no, you will need to remove all portions of the sheet that does not comply with the Official Character Sheet. This means, the personality and information section will have to go, but that doesn't mean they can't be integrated into the other portions of the sheet like the history portion and such. Please also remove the emoticon and you are missing a word in the 'brief childhood' section header. The order of your headers are also not matching up to the official character sheet either, so you will need to fix that as well. ;)

And if you are asking if Sapphire would be able to bring Spike with her to Hogwarts, then unfortunately the answer is no; dogs aren't allowed after all.

Once you've edited the sheet, just go ahead and make sure to change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Sapphire Creekman- Pending
« Reply #5 on: 05 Feb 2012, 12:35 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski