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Offline Montezuma Jaydi

Montezuma Jaydi - Approved [R]
« on: 05 Jan 2012, 05:48 pm »
First and Last Name: Montezuma Jaydi

Bloodline: Muggleborn
Hair Color: Dark Auburn
Eye Color: Greenish Hazel
General Build: average
Height: average
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Birthplace: Canterbury, England
Brief Childhood History: Montezuma Jaydi was born on November 30th in Canterbury England to parents Maurice and Orville Jaydi. She was the younger sister of Jake Jaydi, and the older sister of Leopold Jaydi. Growing up she lived a fairly standard muggle childhood, but she learned to stand up for herself from a young age because whenever she would perform accidental magic kids at her school would bully her and she would have to stand up for herself and fight back. Her mother was a store clerk and her father was a surgeon at a nearby hospital, but her mother was killed in a car crash when she was nine, so she and her siblings were forced to live with their dad. Growing up in a family of all males gave Montezuma a more tomboyish outlook on life, but it also made her a little reckless. She made friends very easily because of her lively nature, but she also made just a many enemies for her very unique personality. Her older brother possesses no magical abilities (her younger brother might) and when she received her letter she was a bit torn because she usually had a good relationship with her brother, but he was very upset that he was not part of this magical world that she was, but she decided to try to put things aside for the moment and just put her best foot forward and try it. She hopes to make good friends at Hogwarts and fit in as best as she can.
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Strengths (Including Academic and Personality): Montezuma is very intelligent and participates in class a lot. She is good at standing up for herself and others, and making friends. She is very good at reading, and it is her favorite pastime. She is very strong willed, and it usually helps her when she's trying to convince somebody of something. These things help make her very good at Astronomy because of it's linkage to reading, Charms, and Defense Against the Dark Arts.
Weaknesses (Including Academic and Personality): She is very single minded, and once she has made her mind up she will not change it. She also has very little common sense and has trouble paying attention to small details which makes her poor at History of Magic, Potions, and Herbology. She also is sometimes a bit arrogant, and thinks very highly of herself.
What House You Believe Your Character Belongs in and Why: Montezuma would probably belong in Ravenclaw because she is very intelligent and quick witted throughout all of her faults, she enjoys reading and she knows that in Ravenclaw she wouldn't seem unusual or odd to anybody else. She hopes to find good friends that will accept all of her, her faults included, and she thinks her personality type best suits that of Ravenclaw.
« Last Edit: 17 Jan 2012, 05:50 pm by Jayce »

Offline Tany

Re: Montezuma Jaydi
« Reply #1 on: 05 Jan 2012, 06:32 pm »
Heya Montezuma and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can begin with the sorting process, we need you to use the complete ~*Official HPRPG Character Sheet*~ with all parts in tact. ;3 Once you've edited just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited' and we'll continue with the sorting.

Offline Jayce

Re: Montezuma Jaydi - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 07 Jan 2012, 12:15 pm »
Hi there! Unfortunately, you are still missing one portion of the official character sheet. If you just compare your sheet with an approved one, I'm sure you'll spot the missing portion quickly. ;)

In addition, at the end of Montezuma's history, you list her academic strengths and weaknesses. Please remove this and place them in the actual strengths and weaknesses category.

Once you've done that, just swap your title again!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Montezuma Jaydi

Re: Montezuma Jaydi - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 07 Jan 2012, 12:48 pm »
Well, I'm not sure what portion I'm missing, I checked it with the approved ones and could find no difference, so I'm not sure what to change, (I appologize for this) but I did remove the part about her strengths and weaknesses at the end of "brief childhood history"

Offline Jayce

Re: Montezuma Jaydi - Edited
« Reply #4 on: 08 Jan 2012, 09:01 pm »
Well, if you are comparing your sheet to the sheets of others, it's very hard to miss what portion you're missing since it's the first thing you should have. :sweatdrop: I know we're being very picky about this, but we do like to keep things uniform here, so I'm sorry for all the trouble. :lol:

And while you did remove the academic portion from the history, you forgot to add the academic strengths into the actual strengths section of the sheet.

Once you've fixed that, just swap the title again!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Montezuma Jaydi

Re: Montezuma Jaydi - Edited
« Reply #5 on: 12 Jan 2012, 05:16 pm »
Sorry about that, I'm not sure how I missed it, I also added in her academic strengths into her strengths, it should be all good now.

Offline Tany

Re: Montezuma Jaydi - Edited
« Reply #6 on: 14 Jan 2012, 09:48 am »
Looks good! Thank you for editing~!

Unfortunately, Ravenclaw house is currently closed, so we're going to go ahead and pop you on the waiting list. If, at any time, you feel you could see Montezuma in another house feel free to edit your sheet accordingly and poke us here! <3

Offline Jayce

Re: Montezuma Jaydi - Waiting [R-1]
« Reply #7 on: 17 Jan 2012, 05:49 pm »
:approvedr:

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski