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Offline Ellie Hunter

Ellie Hunter - Approved [H]
« on: 14 Dec 2011, 07:11 pm »
First and Last Name: Ellie Hunter

Bloodline: Haft blood

Hair Color: Dark brown

Eye Color: Green

General Build: Petite

Height: Average

Birthplace: Oxford, UK

Brief Childhood History: Ellie was born to Eveline, a pure-blood, and William, a muggle-born. When Ellie was around seven years of age her mother left her and her family; they soon moved to Leichester after that.

Growing up Ellie helped her father take care of her two younger siblings, Noah and Natalie. Ellie and her father grew to be slightly distance from each other. Ellie turned into the mother figure for her siblings while her father spent most of his time working.

While living in Leichester Ellie didn't have many friends. Many other kids thought of Ellie as awkward and quiet. The only friends Ellie had beside her younger siblings were two boys, Robert and Charlie. Ellie found them much easier to get along with than the girls her age.

Strengths: The only class where Ellie really shines is Charms. She finds the class quite easy, unlike the rest. Ellie is also quite good at Quidditch, she loves the feeling of the wind in her hair and feeling free. She is too shy to actually fly in front of someone else other then her siblings though.

Weaknesses: Ellie might be soft and caring with her siblings but with everyone else she comes off as sarcastic and a bit harsh at times. She has a hard time with making friends and talking in front of people. With every class, other than Charms, Ellie has a hard time paying attention. Her worst class is Potions, she blows up almost every potion she makes. She (silently) enjoys the humor of her failure at potions though.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Hufflepuff. I believe this because even though Ellie comes off as sarcastic and sometimes harsh she can be caring and friendly. She strongly believes in fairness and equality. When she puts her mind to it she can be a hard worker. Once you get to know her Ellie is lively and humorous, always wanting to do the right thing. Ellie is truly a Hufflepuff at heart; hard working, extremely loyal and fair.
« Last Edit: 29 Dec 2011, 03:57 am by Jayce »

Offline Tany

Re: Ellie Hunter
« Reply #1 on: 14 Dec 2011, 08:37 pm »
Heya Ellie and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, I'm going to have to ask that you give us a bit more about Ellie in her history. It's understood that her mother left and she became a sort of maternal figure for her siblings, but... did she attend school? What did she do for fun? Did she have any friends? Also maybe note that almost every sentence starts or ends with 'after her mother left' and it makes it kind of wonky to read. ^^ <3

Once you've made the above edit just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

Offline Jayce

Re: Ellie Hunter - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 29 Dec 2011, 03:56 am »
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