Topic: Clarissa Adriane Vernet - Denied

[Clarissa Vernet]

First and Last Name:Clarissa Vernet
Bloodline: Pureblood
Hair Color: Brunette
Eye Color: Brunette
General Build: Average
Height: Tall
Birthplace: Paris, France
Brief Childhood History:
Clarissa has two older brothers who graduated and became Aurors. She got along with them but lost touch after they started going on missions. Sometimes they come back and teach techniques on how to duel or quidditch. She was never close to her father since he always was supposedly in his study working while her spoiled her being the last child in the house and the only girl. Her mother want's Clarissa and her to leave the house because her father was a death eater and occasionally helps them kill muggles or anyone on their hit list, for this reason she wants to stop the Death Eaters.
She was always with her mum and hardly ever saw her father leading to a semi happy life that was just missing a father figure. At a young age she had an incident that changed her which became her deepest, darkest secret. She was in France with a old friend of hers when it happened. Mysteriously she finds out her parents have the secret too. She couldn't wait for Hogwarts so when she gets her letter she told her mum that she would become famous just you watch.
Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Loyal, friendly, easy to trust, persistent, agile, somewhat intelligent, Astronomy.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Boys, afraid of the dark (would never admit it), get's stressed easily and can't stay still.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:Hufflepuff because she is bubbly, hyper, loyal, nice but chickens out, is a procastinist, and has her blonde moments.

[Ninjela]

Hey! Welcome to HPRPG!

Before we can sort you, there are a few issues in your character sheet we need to address:

1) All Hogwarts students must be born and raised in the United Kingdom. If Clarissa was born in Paris, then she would attend Beauxbatons, the French school for magic. Please change her birthplace to someplace in England, Ireland, Scotland or Wales.

2) We do not allow characters to be related to canon characters. All of the Death Eaters were named in the books, which means that Clarissa's father could not have been one of them. You may say that he supported the Death Eaters, but HPRPG has a very loose timeline that is set after the conclusion of the Harry Potter books, which means that the Death Eaters have disbanded.

3) Could you please re-write the strengths and weaknesses sections so they are written as paragraphs, not as lists? Feel free to add some more details as well. Why is she bad at Astronomy? Also, please include at least one class that would be considered a weakness.

Once you've made these changes, change the title of this thread from 'pending' to 'edited' and we can move on!

[Jayce]

As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes!