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Tomoko Hiruguchi - Approved [S]
« on: 04 Dec 2011, 03:08 am »
First and Last Name:Tomoko Hiruguchi.

Bloodline: Pureblood.
Hair Color: Dark.
Eye Color: Raven, very dark blue, her pupil is difficult to see.
General Build: Petite.
Height: Average.

Birthplace: Dundee Scotland.
Brief Childhood History: Tomoko is of Japanese descent, her parents moved over to the United Kingdom before she was born. Both of her parents are " Pureblood" , Japan afterall, has its fair share of magic and  mysticism. Her clan has been one of the top respected Magical Families in Japan for centuries, so it falls to Tomoko to raise up their reputation in the Western World, or so she is always reminded by her Father, most likely this is the reason why she strives so hard to achieve perfection. Her childhood was fraught with a need to fulfil her parent’s expectations of her.

She was tutored in the arts of magic by her parents, they sought to give her a head-start at Hogwarts by having her learn more than what the average first-year would know, this would increase the chances of her being noticed by her Professors.

Throughout her childhood, she had few proper friends. She would attend the Muggle School and appear to be a gifted student. Given her obvious intellectual advantages, she quickly became the target for bullying. Tomoko was befriended by a classmate who was just as intelligent as she was, and the two got on so well. A muggle girl by the name of Marie Pemberton. She knew Tomoko as a witch the moment they had met, because she had an older brother who was in Hogwarts at fifth year.

Incidents did occur every now and then, such as Tomoko's bullies finding themselves suddenly appearing in the wooded area outside of the school, or cartons of milk flying from the canteen and homing in on their heads. She possessed extraordinary abilities for a witch, young as she was, but when she became the subject of suspicion she was withdrawn from mainstream education.


Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): She's a brilliant girl with a great head on her shoulders, having been studying magic since she was old enough to read and take it in.
She's very adept at finding solutions to problems, keeping her cool in dangerous or uncertain situations. She's also one determined girl, if she sets her sights on a goal, she will stop at nothing until she can achieve it.
Another strength of hers is that she had empathy for those who suffer, she isn't the sort that can sit back and watch others be picked on, understanding how horrible it feels to be picked on herself. She will try to help out if she can, usually offering a word of advice to the bully; to back off or be hexed.
She's by no means overly brave, but when it counts, she will defend someone at the risk of herself getting injured.

Her areas of expertise are Charms, Transfiguration and Defense Against the Dark Arts. She maintains above average grades on most subjects except for one.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Quite a shy girl, very hard to approach and sometimes harder to understand. She tends to be quite random in the way she acts or answers people. She’s also quite socially awkward. She can be hostile towards people who intimidate or irk her, but generally she's quite laid-back and it's hard to get her to lose her cool. But when you do, you'd better run for it, or you'll be oozing goo from your eyesockets with a conjunctivitis curse.

Her worst subject is Divination, as she believes that foreseeing the future is not something that everyone can do if they try. She’s of the opinion that those who become seers were born with that fate.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: She'd definitely belong to Slytherin most of all, her brilliant mind is rivalled only by that of her desire to be the best at everything she does.
Afterall, she's got to shoulder the burden of being a representative of her clan.
She's quite competitive and boastful if she gets the urge to rub her abilities in someone's face.
« Last Edit: 09 Dec 2011, 11:05 pm by Tany »

Offline Jayce

Re: Tomoko Hiruguchi
« Reply #1 on: 04 Dec 2011, 09:27 am »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can get you sorted, there are just a few things to attend to.

You'll need to edit Tomoko's hair colour to simply being dark. Hogwarts is a strict boarding school after all and they most likely would not allow an eleven-year-old child to add bright highlights to her hair. This can be something you explore for her when she grows older though.

We also require a solid 2-3 paragraphs of history, so please expand on what you already have. Perhaps tell us about her prior schooling or if she had childhood friends. We'd just like to get to know Tomoko a little better. ;)

Please also give us at least two personality strengths. Right now everything there is academic-orientated.

Finally, here at HPRPG, we leave the choice of the house up to the driver. This is because it's an incredibly important decision that helps shape and develop your character and nobody knows your character better than you! So please choose either Slytherin or Ravenclaw for Tomoko and edit that portion accordingly.

Once you've done that, just change your title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Tomoko Hiruguchi - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 04 Dec 2011, 01:26 pm »
Thank you for making the edits! Everything looks great, except for the bit in her history about her using her parents wands. I am going to have to ask you to change that. Her parents can have helped her study the subjects and the theories behind the spells, but she cannot have actually performed them with a wand. I'm sure the Ministry would have found out about it and cracked down severely upon her parents.

Once you've done that, just change the title again. ^__^

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Re: Tomoko Hiruguchi - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 07 Dec 2011, 06:47 am »
Would'ja mind popping me onto the waiting list for Slytherin?
I'd be very grateful. <3

Offline Tany

Re: Tomoko Hiruguchi - Waiting [S-1]
« Reply #4 on: 09 Dec 2011, 11:05 pm »
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