Hi and welcome to hprpg
Before we can continue with the sorting, there are several changes I'm going to need you to make. First of all I need you to go and make sure you are typing in complete sentences, using proper punctuation, spelling, and grammar. This is really important since you're going to be interacting with other players here in a text-based format. People won't be able to play with you if they can't understand you.
We're also going to need you to give us some more information about Serena and the things that she liked to do as a child, as well as her personality. Not just her family. So a bit more detail in the history section would be helpful.
The same goes for the strengths and weaknesses section.
It needs to be written in paragraph form, and you need to give us at least three academic and personality strengths and weaknesses. Which classes she'd do well or poorly in for example, and things about her personality that are good or bad.
When you've made your changes, you can switch your title from 'pending' to 'edited' and someone will come have another look~
