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Offline Aya Summers

Aya Summers - Approved [S]
« on: 29 Nov 2011, 06:10 pm »
First and Last Name: Aya Summers

Bloodline: Half blood
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Bright Green
General Build:Petite
Height: Short

Birthplace: England
Brief Childhood History:
Aya was born in England, but traveled often during her childhood,  going on a vacation every few months and moving around the country every year. This was because her mother was running from magic, but Aya and the rest of her family did not know that until she was 10 years old, when her own powers presented themselves. They moved back to London as soon as they found out so she could go to Hogwarts.
   When Aya was nine, she made her first true best friend. He was a muggle boy named Alex, and she trusted him with all of her heart. When they were playing one day, he suddenly got moody and they got in a fight. While Aya tried to run away, she tripped and fell on a stone, leaving a star-shaped scar on her forehead. She has difficulties trusting people now because of this experience.
   Aya lived in an upper middle class family, allowing her to travel often, but she didn't become a snob or selfish because of this. Her parents made sure that she didn't receive everything she ever wanted and always reminded her to be grateful for what she has.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Aya is going to be very good at Transfiguration and Divination, and be moderately good at Charms. This is partly due to the fact she is good at pronouncing spells correctly and coordinating it with wand movement. She also has a natural gift for Divination that is slightly inherited from her mother. Personality wise, she is very caring and fun. Her father taught her to always care for other people's feelings and to always have fun. She is also very strong and confident, mainly because her mother told her she was so she made it happen. Aya is loyal to her friends and will always stand up for them. She is also very creative and is constantly writing new song lyrics.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Aya is not very good at History of Magic, Flying, and Arithmancy. She is extremely stubborn and refuses to back down. She is lazy and will often do things at the last moment because she can still pass if she does that. She is a bit of a prankster and annoys people a lot of the time. She does not trust people instantly and will often get in fights. Although she is loyal to friends, if they lie to her or start talking behind her back, she will seek retribution. She acts on emotion by choice.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I believe she belongs in Slytherin because she does not trust people and will typically stay secluded to herself. Aya is clever and stubborn, but also lazy and not really social. Although loyal, she will turn against friends in a second if they hurt her. She doesn't listen to reason, she reacts.
« Last Edit: 15 Dec 2011, 05:03 pm by Jayce »

Offline Sue

Re: Aya Summers
« Reply #1 on: 01 Dec 2011, 08:07 pm »
Hi and welcome to HPRPG :D

The sheet is looking pretty good, but I'm going to have to ask you to make a change before we proceed. In order for students to attend Hogwarts, they must be born and raised in the UK, meaning that the majority of her childhood must have been in the UK, and her residence has to be in the UK. She can travel on vacations and such, but she's gotta live in the UK.  :sweatdrop:

Once you've made your edits, please change your title from 'pending' to 'edited' and someone will come along and have another look~

all my love for Tany

Offline Jayce

Re: Aya Summers - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 04 Dec 2011, 09:00 am »
Thank you for making the edits! Unfortunately, there are still a couple of things that need attending to.

I'm going to have to ask you to edit the portion about Alex attacking Aya. A child attacking another child and basically carving a star into her forehead is a pretty serious matter. You can keep the idea of the scuffle between them, but instead of having the knife, perhaps Alex simply attacked her and knocked her down and in that way, perhaps she got her scar.

Also, I'm going to need you to perhaps reword the way you've describe Aya's family's financial situation. It doesn't really make much sense to say that they were poor at times but still rich, travel a lot, and live moderately. Perhaps what you meant to say was that at times, they had to live poorly to save funds to travel?

Once you've edited that, just change your title again!

In addition, Slytherin is closed at the moment so I'm going to put you on the waiting list. If at any point you'd like to switch houses for Aya, simply edit the sheet accordingly and let us know. ^____^

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Aya Summers - Waiting [S-1]
« Reply #3 on: 15 Dec 2011, 05:02 pm »
:approveds:

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski