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Helena Heartstring

Helena Heartstring - Approved [S]
« on: 23 Nov 2011, 01:22 pm »
First and Last Name:Helena Heartstring

Bloodline:Pureblood
Hair Color: Jet black
Eye Color: Green
General Build: Average
Height: Short

Birthplace: London, England

Brief Childhood History: Helena was born on October 17 to Beatrice and Thomas Heartstring. She lived in a mansion in Heartstring Haven, a large land in the countryside of england owned by her family. Her father worked at the ministry of magic alongside her mother,who was in charge of muggle born registration. She was a spoiled child often getting everything she wanted. She had many muggle nannys, who seem to dissapear after a short period of time. Helena was taught by her father that muggle borns and half bloods were a race that tainted the wizard world and are considered lowly and undue burdens. As for siblings, she has an older brother named Hector , a snatcher, currently held in Azkaban prison for his attempts to wipeout the muggle born and half-blood race by killing all non-purebloods. Despite Helena’s father’s attempts to free her brother, the head of the ministry of magic has denied all paperwork to exonerate him. Due to the lack of magic based elementary schools, she was home schooled by her highly intellectual mother until the age of 11, when Helena was to go to Hogwarts. She owns a grey feathered owl named Dante as a pet that's been with her since she was a baby. Helena never had any friends during childhood, due to the fact that her parents did not want her associating with muggles.


Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Helena is an independent, strong willed, and friendly to all purebloods. She was raised by her parents to believe that purebloods are to stick together and be friendly to one another in order to wipeout all the muggle borns and half bloods. The independent trait came from her childhood, her parents believed that she must learn how to handle things herself. Whenever Helena fell, her parents wouldn’t run to her aid she had to get up on her own,if she got hurt she was told not to cry as pain was just a form of weakness. She would excel in charms class and defense against the dark arts. She would study whenever she could, even on weekends. Also, she would practice defense against the dark arts skills with other students, as long as the professor is monitoring them.

Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): In terms of personality weakness, she is very sensitive and unable to control her anger. Even the smallest comment will tick her off. If someone was to make fun of her she would become upset and that sadness will quickly turn into anger. If one was to get on her bad side she would make sure that he/or she suffered throughout their stay at Hogwarts. Her trait of anger problems and inability to let things go was inherited from her father. Also, she is very domineering, things are done either her way or no way. The domineering trait was inherited by her mother. Academically her weakness is History of Magic and Potions. Helena tends to fall asleep during lectures in History of Magic and often uses her book as a pillow. Potions that she attempts to make either blow up in her face or land her in the infirmary.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I feel like my character belongs in Slytherin because she is cunning and able to make anyone do what she wants them to do. Also, like a typical Slytherin she is very ambitious, when there's something she wants to do,she will make it happen one way or another. She also believes that purebloods should only be allowed in Hogwarts.
« Last Edit: 25 Nov 2011, 01:28 pm by Tany »

Offline Tany

Re: Helena Heartstring
« Reply #1 on: 23 Nov 2011, 02:12 pm »
Heya Helena and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there's two things that needs a bit of expanding. First, could you give us some 'why's in her strengths? You tell us she's independent, strong willed, and friendly-- could you explain why she's all of these? Additionally, the chance of her blocking and countering every spell cast at her is highly unlikely for her age and I just want to forewarn you that that won't necessarily be plausible during classes at HPRPG. ^^;

Secondly, the only weakness you give is that she's mean to muggleborns and half-bloods and she trips them. Is that necessarily a weakness? Keep in mind it's always good to balance a character's strengths and weaknesses! So could you perhaps give us a few more here? That'd be great!

Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

Offline Tany

Re: Helena Heartstring - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 25 Nov 2011, 01:27 pm »
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