Topic: Viola Tyler - Denied

[Viola Tyler]

First and Last Name: Viola Tyler
Bloodline: (Choose one of the following: Pure, Half, or Muggleborn): Half Blood
Hair Color: (Natural Hair Colors only) Light brown
Eye Color: (Natural Eye Colors only) Hazel
General Build: (Choose one of the following: large, average, petite) Petite
Height: (Choose one of the following: short, average, tall) Average
Birthplace: Cockney
Brief Childhood History: (2-3 paragraphs on what your character's life was like before Hogwarts. We only want the basics for now; you'll get to expand on this later!) Viola's dad is a muggle and her mom is a witch. Her dad left her and her mother when he found out she was a witch. She is an only child and is being raised by her mother.
Strengths (At least three, including Personality and Academic): (For academic strengths, please name a Hogwarts class or two that you plan on making your character good at.) Good at Divination, Content a lot of the time, Good at Astronomy.
Weaknesses (At least three, including Personality and Academic): (For academic weaknesses, please name a Hogwarts class or two that you plan on making your character poor at.) Terrible at Arithmancy, is very quiet, and is introverted.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I feel Viola belongs in Ravenclaw. She's clever, likes to study, and is shy. She believes in things beyond the Wizarding World. Being an only child to a single mother, her mother taught her about the Wizarding World.

[Jayce]

Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can get you sorted, there are just a few things to attend to.

It's great that you're using the official form! But you don't need to keep the parts in in parentheses, since those are just little notes to help you fill it out.

Now onto the sheet~

For the birthplace portion, please give us the country that Viola is from as well. And for the history, we will need 2-3 solid paragraphs. Expand on perhaps how growing up with a single parent was like. How was their financial situation? Did she have friends? Did she go to school? These are just a few things you can talk about in the section.

We will also need you to expand on what you have in the strengths and weaknesses section. Right now it seems more like a list and we'd like to know why those particular attributes are what they are to Viola.

Once you've done that, just change your title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

[Jayce]

As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes!