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Offline Elisabeth Gregory

Elisabeth Gregory - Approved [G]
« on: 08 Nov 2011, 08:56 am »
First and Last Name: Elisabeth "Bep" Gregory
Bloodline: Half-Blood
Hair Colour: Brown
Eye Colour: Blue
General Build: Petite
Height: Short

Birthplace: Bradford, West Yorkshire
Brief Childhood History:
Bep grew up on a muggle street in Bradford. In her home was her parents (both magical) and her older sisters, and her paternal grandfather, Jim (who was a muggle). With her mum, Brianne, having a busy job at the ministry, her dad, Stephen, a busy job at the Daily Prophet and her not especially close to her sisters, Andi, Katie and Hattie , she became very close to her Granddad, which ended up making her extremely northern working class and well as quite muggle-like.
Bep went to a muggle primary school and made lots of muggle friends, as well as being quite good at muggle subjects and the lack of being surrounded by magic growing up, Bep felt that she did not want to go to Hogwarts.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): She is quite smart, is good at Defence Against the Dark Arts (and later Muggle Studies, though that is more due to her muggle-ness than her intelligence). She is quite good at making friends and being trusted by people due to her genuine kindness. She is very good at Quidditch and flying. She also quite good at picking up languages (of any kind, magical or muggle).
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): She is very clumsy and is terrible at potions. She often does things for people that get her into trouble because she is borderline too nice (e.g. getting detentions so her friend doesn't have to). Bep also occasionally cares too much what people think and worries about it (though this is rare and is probably when she is stepping outside of her comfort zone) and hates doing things in front of crowds (though, she generally doesn't care about Quidditch due to the fact that she's more interested in not falling off her broom than the crowd) especially making speeches or just talking in general to large groups of people.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Don't mind, because Bep would be good in Gryffindor, because she is brave and adventurous and her dad was in Gryffindor too.
« Last Edit: 10 Nov 2011, 04:03 pm by Tany »

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Offline Tany

Re: Elisabeth Gregory
« Reply #1 on: 08 Nov 2011, 08:56 pm »
Heya Elisabeth and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need clearing up/edits. First, could you maybe give us another personality strength? So far we have smart and good at making friends-- a lot of the stuff you mentioned in your reasoning for making her a Gryffindor could go here. :3 Same with her weaknesses-- could you give us a few more personality weaknesses?

Once you've made the above edits just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

Offline Tany

Re: Elisabeth Gregory - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 10 Nov 2011, 02:09 pm »
Thank you for editing~!

However, two more things. ^^;

I'm not sure what you mean by her being good at languages, both muggle and magical. Well, I understand the muggle portion, but... I'm not sure what magical languages she knows? Maybe explain that or chose a different strength. :3

And secondly, we ask that you specify which house you think your character should be sorted into. While it's fine that you think she'd work in any of the three, it leaves us unsure of where you want her to go. A character's house is very important in the long-term development of them and the staff won't pick for you.

You know the drill with the title. <3

Offline Tany

Re: Elisabeth Gregory - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 10 Nov 2011, 04:02 pm »
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