Topic: Arianna Lauro - Approved [G]

[Arianna Lauro]

First and Last Name: Arianna Lauro
Bloodline: Pureblood
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
General Build: Petite
Height: Short
Birthplace:London, England.
Brief Childhood History: Before Hogwarts, Arianna lived with her parents and her younger sister Talia Lauro. Talia is her best friend even though their sisters. They did everything together and learnt the way of magic for they were pure blood. Their older brother, Scot Lauro is out of the house training at Hogwarts. Arianna and Talia always loved to watch their mother and father do magic. They watched their mother cook and father levitate things just for his children. Talia and Arianna always begged their parents to at least let them try one spell but their parents always said no. Arianna is very close to her family. She believes all wizards and witches should be treated fair and she hates the evil that is brewing.
Arianna mostly hung out with her younger sister. They always loved sitting outside just watching the clouds. Arianna loves art and nature and often draws animals in the backyard with Talia who loves to pose for Arianna. Arianna and Talia are always there for each other and you wouldnt see Arianna without her sister.
Arianna and Talia had always loved karate. They took classes together and became black belts. They learnt about confidence in everything you do and to be positive, brave, and to never give up. Sometimes they got permission to train karate classes together.
At school, the kids always thought Arianna was a freak for Arianna always day dreamed of dragons and cool mythical creatures. One boy had tried to punch her and called her a freak. Arianna though learnt how to stand up for herself because she punched him back although they got in trouble.
When Arianna got the letter to Hogwarts she was thrilled yet sad. She'd have to leave her family and Talia. Talia told her she'd meet her there.
Strengths: Arianna finds Defense against the Dark Arts quite fun and exciting. Arianna loves Transfiguration and just seeing boring old things turn into fun exciting new things. She's daring and bold. She loves and cares deeply for her friends and family. Arianna loves Flying class. It is her one of her favorite classes and she just loves the feel of flying through the air soaring like a bird. She also loves the idea of being on a broomstick and maybe being captain of her house's quidditch team. Arianna will stand up for what is right for her family friends and herself. Arianna is never shy and sometimes loud yet very polite. Arianna is simply a fun loving girl and tries to stay positive.
Weaknesses: Arianna struggles in mostly Potions. She tries her best to remember the right order but she has never been good at it. A personality weakness would be she can also get cocky at what she's doing and jumps into some things too fast. Arianna is sensitive some and at times have low self confidence and she can be very negative. Arianna can sometimes say very stinging remarks when someone gets her mad. She can sometimes be sassy, and she can be very naggy. She can sometimes blurt things out and say things too quickly and not think about it before saying it. She isn't the wisest girl and she is very impatient. Arianna is judgmental sometimes and jealous.
What House You Feel You Character Belongs In And Why: Hmm... I think Gryffindor for Arianna is bold and daring and fun. She is always first to step up for a fun activity or motivate her friends.

[Tany]

Heya Arianna and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need clearing up and editing. First, her history slightly confuses me-- she lives with her parents, younger sister, and best friend (any reason her best friend lives with her or is her best friend her sister?), but then you go on to mention they also have an older brother? Or is he just out of the house and I misunderstood? ^^; Also, there's nothing wrong with her history, but I'm slightly confused as to how the 'near punches' from the boy she liked is included in her childhood history..

Lastly, could you give us a few more personality weaknesses? Fear of reptiles isn't really a weakness more than it's just a fear and I feel that her strengths outweigh her weaknesses. ;3

Once you've made the above edits just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

[Tany]