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Luna Lakewood

Luna Lakewood - Approved [R]
« on: 11 Oct 2011, 04:27 am »
First and Last Name: Luna Lakewood

Bloodline: Pureblood
Hair Color: Light Brown
Eye Color: Green/Hazel
General Build: petite
Height: average

Birthplace: Liverpool, England.
Brief Childhood History: Luna was born in Liverpool and was brought up by two pure blooded wizard&witch.When her mom&dad were in Hogwarts, her dad was in slytherin and her mom was in ravenclaw. She has a twin brother named Kenneth. When Luna and Kenneth were 8, their father got put into Azkaban because of him being a dark lord supporter. Luna's mom and dad we're really rich, which meant Luna and Kenneth got anything they wanted. As a child, Luna loved reading playing with her dolls and  being with her brother.

Luna and her brother were both being home schooled helped them a lot before hogwarts, they of course got taught about magic, but also about muggle things, Luna enjoyed it very much while Kenneth would always be complaining about how stupid muggles are. Luna and her brother were really close, they would always cause a lot of trouble though. When they got their hogwarts letters they were both really happy. As a child, Luna loved reading playing with her dolls and  being with her brother.

Their mom isn't so happy about them leaving, but she knows she must deal with it.


Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Luna is an avid reader, imaginative, and clever. She is witty, and can outdo most people in a battle of insults, as she is clever with comebacks. She's a good student, though she tends to leave homework until the last minute. She still gets O’s and E’s, though. Her muggle parents' attitude taught her to be open-minded, because she didn't want anyone to feel the way she felt because of her. Academically, she excels the most when classes are active (practical). So naturally, her best subjects are Potions, Herbology, Flying and Transfiguration.

Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Luna, while a good person, also has her faults. She has a fiery temper. Although she has a sense of humor, she doesn't know the difference between playful teasing and being insulted, and will lash out with a sharp tongue right back, and she always has to have the last word. And if she doesn't like you, it's really hard to change her opinion of you. As she is easily bored in classes that are predominately theory, she doesn't do well in History of Magic or Astronomy.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Luna would probably be a Ravenclaw. She's very clever and loves books and learning (except history).  Her personal ambition at Hogwarts is to read every book in the library, including as many in the Restricted Section as she can- with permission, of course.  She would also enjoy standing outside the Ravenclaw Common Room trying to exhaust the eagle of riddles for no reason other than her own amusement.
« Last Edit: 12 Oct 2011, 09:49 am by Ninjela »

Offline Tany

Re: Luna Lakewood
« Reply #1 on: 11 Oct 2011, 08:48 pm »
Heya Luna and welcome to HPRPG~!

Unfortunately, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need editing. ^^ First, her being brought up initially by muggles sort of confuses me, because you have her parents suddenly come along and take her and the necessity of having been raised by muggles for six years just becomes... nothing, from what I understand.

Also, her father can not have been a death eater as we know all the names of the death eaters in the book. He's welcome to have been a dark lord supporter, however. Additionally, I'm actually going to have to ask that you change the brother's name. Two children with names of canon characters is just... well, curious, unless you have a specific reason for this? ^^

One small thing in her weaknesses- you say she has a sense of humor, but knows the difference between teasing and insults, so she'll lash out and have the last word... I think I'm missing why this is a weakness? Did you mean she doesn't know the difference between teasing and insulting? Or were you meaning that her need to have the final say was a weakness?

Once you've made the above edits just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited' and we'll continue with your sorting from there.

Offline Ninjela

Re: Luna Lakewood - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 12 Oct 2011, 09:48 am »
:approvedr:

Nikki made the pretty!