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Kyle Ambrose - Approved [H]
« on: 03 Oct 2011, 02:03 pm »
First and Last Name: Kyle Ambrose

Bloodline: Half-blood
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Green
General Build: average
Height: tall

Birthplace: Aigburth, Liverpool
Brief Childhood History: Kyle was born in Aigburth, Liverpool and was raised by her parents Trevor and Brit Geleto, who are both half magical. When she was two years of age, she and her parents moved to London so her father could be near his family. Her father works as an muggle banker and her mother is a Shop assistant in Diagon Alley. Kyle has a younger sister, Amethyst, who is seven years younger than she. Kyle enjoys gardening and spending time looking after the neighbors pets. Kyle loves sing in her spare time and likes drawing pictures of dragons.

Kyle was home schooled, then she got her Hogwarts letter. Being home schooled, Kyle has become a family oriented girl, and has learned things such as cooking at farming. She enjoys caring for baby goats and cows.

Spencer spends most of her time with her little sister, Amethyst, caring for her, feeding her, also making sure that she learns the things she, herself, has learned. Amethyst is isn't so happy about Kyle's leaving, but she knows she must deal with it.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Kyle is a very Strong Girl. She plays a lot of sports, and she is also strong emotionally, usually keeping her feelings in. She is extremely Friendly, and often times gets along with most people. Good Listening is what Kyle does best. If anyone in need of someone to talk to, Kyle is their gal! Her good listening skills also help her a lot in classes. Kyle is naturally Loyal and is very Rule-abiding. She is very faithful to her parents, friends, and beliefs. Because Kyle finds interest in the outdoors, she will in enjoy CoMC and Herbology.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): If you let her, Kyle can become a Procrastinator, leaving off tasks that she really doesn't want to do. She can be and is very Protective of the ones she loves, which can get really out of hand sometimes. And she will do anything to protect friends and family. She is also Self-conscious, always thinking she's not the best for everything. So, she needs a lot of encouragement. Kyle is much of a pushover. In her mind, she can't tell when someones is using her. And in turn gets her feelings hurt. Kyle is very much bored easily, and if she sets down too long in classes like History of Magic and Arithmancy, she will more than like;y fall asleep.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:Kyle should be in Hufflepuff because she is loyal and hardworking. She often times tries to bring the peace, and she's very friendly, but not that brave at all. She has not a mean bone in her body, and while she's smart, she's not that intelligent.
« Last Edit: 05 Oct 2011, 10:36 am by Jayce »

Offline Tany

Re: Kyle Ambrose
« Reply #1 on: 03 Oct 2011, 02:54 pm »
Heya Kyle and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need editing. First and foremore, for the 'general build' and 'height' categories, we'd prefer if you used one of the three given adjectives on the sheet rather than exact measurements and such. ^^

As for her history, I don't really feel we know too much about her... Most of what you've given here could be relocated to the strengths and weaknesses portions. We're looking for her childhood- how did she grow up, what did she do for fun, did she attend a school prior to Hogwarts, etc. Feel free to look at some approved applications for a better idea of what we're looking for and try to aim for a minimum of two paragraphs. ;)

Lastly, we ask that you not list the strengths and weaknesses- instead, think of it like a skeleton who needs some meat on his bones! Give us some whys behind everything. Why is she strong, protective, friendly... Why is that a strength? Why is procrastinating an important weakness to her character? Keep in mind that we do need some academic weaknesses, as well.

Once you've made your edits just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited' and we'll continue from there.

Offline Jayce

Re: Kyle Ambrose - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 05 Oct 2011, 10:35 am »
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