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Offline Leona Gryffin

Leona Gryffin - Approved [G]
« on: 23 Sep 2011, 05:13 pm »
First and Last Name: Leona Gryffin
 
Bloodline: Pureblood
 Hair Color: White blond
Eye Color: Blue gray, but changes colors with her clothing (this is realistic, because mine do this too)
General Build: petite
Height: short

Birthplace: Framlingham, Suffolk
Brief Childhood History: Leona's dad is Markham Gryffin, a former supporter of the Dark Lord. Her mother is Kaleigh Lamel, a pureblood who works at the ministry and is half her father's age. She has a half brother named Arturo Gryffin, and two half sisters named Ariana and Lira. Ariana is older, Lira is younger. They both hate Leona because their shared mother cheated on their father with Leona's father, ruining their family forever. Arturo seems indifferent, but he secretly looks out for Leona, because she is nineteen years younger then he is. Kaleigh loves Leona, but never sees her because she lives with her father. At a young age, Leona's closest friend was a young boy named Carter Masterson. He was a Muggle that lived down the road from her. Unfortunately, her father found out that the two were friends, and immediately moved away. She was raised as a combination effort between her father and older brother. They taught her to become a very private person, and to never show any weakness. When she refused to comply, her father grew angry and secluded himself in his room. That's when her brother Arturo would step in and play the role of father. Leona never attended school before Hogwarts. Her father believed that a pureblood should never associate with Muggles, and so he homeschooled her. Her favorite thing to do as a young girl was read. She began reading at the age of four, and it became her favorite pastime. At the age of eight, she began making up stories and writing them down, sharing them only with Carter and her brother.


Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): She has a strong personality. She is normally a sweet girl to members of her own house and others. Her strengths lie in Charms, Potions, and surprisingly History of Magic. One of her goals is to free herself from her parents legacy and have her own life.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): She gets almost manic around exam time, studying so hard that her friends have to bodily lift her and stick her in the shower. They'll even have to occasionally call an older student (female, naturally) to come and bind her loosly to her bed so that she'll sleep. She loves to read and write, but if you interrupt her while she's doing either... well, it's your neck. She's scared of not being accepted into her house and/or social circles because of what her parents did. Her acedemic weakness is Transfiguration and Herbology.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I would say that she's either a Gryffindor or a Slytherin, because there's definitely conflicting sides of her personality. She's very loyal, and brave (look at her parents, she has to be) but she also has aspects about her temperament that make her a Slytherin. If I had to choose, I'd say that she's a Gryffindor.
« Last Edit: 01 Oct 2011, 10:00 pm by Tany »

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Offline Tany

Re: Leona Gryffin
« Reply #1 on: 24 Sep 2011, 07:39 pm »
Heya Leona and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need editing. Firstly, 'silvery' blond isn't necessarily realistic. Maybe you meant white blond? Like an almost platnium, Barbie blond? Same with her eyes-- they can be blue-gray, but they cannot change with her mood. ^^; For her 'general build' and 'height' we ask that you use one of the three adjectives given for those two categories rather than specific height measurements and such.

Onto her history, you'll have to remove the notion that her father was a Death Eater as we have canon information provided to name all the Death Eaters that were in Voldemort's circle. He's more than welcome to be a supporter of the Dark Lord, however. Additionally, I don't really feel we know anything about Leona's childhood history and that's what we're looking for-- her childhood. How was she raised, what did she do for fun, did she have any friends, did she attend a school prior to Hogwarts, etc? That sort of thing.

Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited' and we'll continue with your sorting from there.

Offline Tany

Re: Leona Gryffin - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 01 Oct 2011, 10:00 pm »
Eyes changing color at all is actually the unrealistic part. ^^; Eyes don't do that. They do stand out more with certian things, so they'd be more blue against a blue shirt, more gray against gray, and so on. That's fine, so long as you know they're not actually changing.

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