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Offline Juliet Paloni

Juliet Paloni - Approved [G]
« on: 19 Sep 2011, 07:15 pm »
First and Last name:Juliet Paloni

Bloodline:Pureblood
Hair Color:Long, Straight, Dark brown
Eye Color:Brown
General Build :Average
Height:Tall
Birthplace:Liverpool, England

Brief Childhood History:Juliet mostly was raised by her father. Her mother, Elaine Left Juliet and her sister Laney right after they were born, Juliet was named purely from a name her father and her mother had liked.
  Juliet learned her basic skills by watching her friends, and eventually getting the hang of
it. Since she positively refused to admit she needed help from her father, she sat and
watched until she learned how to do what was necessary. Often in her free time she would be playing pranks on her father and her sister, finding it extremely humorous even though half the time she got in trouble for it. Even as she messed with her, Juliet was always protective of her sister and wasn't afraid to show her bad side to anyone who messed with her, as well as her friends. When she was not pranking anyone or defending her sister she was mostly found playing quidditch, reading a good book, singing, or drawing as she always had a knack for art.

Strengths(Personality and Academic):Juliet has a wicked sense of humor, and she is extremely protective. These could most definitely be considered two of her best qualities, they could however also be bad in some cases. She is quite a good quidditch player and is clever and sneaky beyond measure. She became very loving and caring when she got a bit older, and she stayed like that. She is very bubbly and loud most of the time, and she usually will treat someone she knows closely more like a sibling then a friend.
  Juliet would most likely excel in Defense Against Dark Arts, simply because the subject has fascinated her since she was 9, and Potions because she enjoys experimenting.
Weaknesses(Personality and Academic):Juliet is extremely, Amazingly stubborn, and will certainly not take no for an answer. This could be considered one of her most useful and also annoying qualities. She usually doesn't scare easily, but has a huge phobia of spiders and will freeze up at the sight of even the smallest one. Another weakness of hers is that she is not at all pain tolerant and what she has in agility she lacks in strength. She can't stand seeing someone she cares about in pain and she trusts easily, which makes her extremely vulnerable, she is also somewhat gullible and naive at times. She is very impatient as well.
           Juliet would most likely do poorly in History Of Magic, because even as she loves to read, she prefers reading a book that she picks out herself and having to read for a class bores her to tears.
What house you feel your character belongs in and why:
I feel that Juliet would do best in Gryffindor, because she always sticks up for her friends and
is extremely sweet and caring. However she could also do well in Slytherin, because of her cleverness and her ability to be extremely sneaky and cunning.

« Last Edit: 25 Sep 2011, 04:28 pm by Tany »

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Offline Sue

Re: Juliet Paloni
« Reply #1 on: 20 Sep 2011, 04:44 am »
Hi and welcome to hprpg :D

Just a quick question before we proceed. You can reply here with the answer. Are Juliet and Laney twins? I ask because Laney is still a first year and both girls would have to be played as 11 years old if you sort Juliet now.

Switch your title from 'pending' to 'edited' once you've answered so I don't miss the reply. :D

all my love for Tany

Offline Juliet Paloni

Re: Juliet Paloni- Pending
« Reply #2 on: 20 Sep 2011, 11:55 am »
Yes,They are twins :D

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Offline Tany

Re: Juliet Paloni- Edited
« Reply #3 on: 20 Sep 2011, 03:59 pm »
Heya Juliet~!

Thank you for clearing that up! Onto your sheet-- could you bold the categories titles (Example | First and Last Name: Juliet Paloni) and remove the various indentations of your paragraphs? It makes it rather difficult to read. ^^; On that same note, could you also space after your periods and commas so it's not all run-on?

Once you've done that just change the title once more. <3

Offline Juliet Paloni

Re: Juliet Paloni - Pending
« Reply #4 on: 20 Sep 2011, 04:42 pm »
Where it says 'She sat and watched until she learned to do what was necessary'I couldn't seem to stop that from splitting :/

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Offline Tany

Re: Juliet Paloni - Edited
« Reply #5 on: 21 Sep 2011, 01:00 pm »
Thank you for editing~!

Unfortunately, even disregarding that one since you can't edit it, there are still a handful on instances of unnecesary capitalizaton and lack of spacing between periods and commas. <3 I'm only even asking you to look for them all because you'll have to do the same when you start posting on the board, you know? Maybe tossing it through spell-check will catch some of them?

You know the drill with the title. ^^

Offline Juliet Paloni

Re: Juliet Paloni - Pending
« Reply #6 on: 21 Sep 2011, 01:23 pm »
I threw it through spell check, and it just tries to change Pranking and Paloni. Other than that it doesn't say anything.

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Offline Juliet Paloni

Re: Juliet Paloni - Edited
« Reply #7 on: 21 Sep 2011, 02:14 pm »
I didn't even see the capitalization mistakes before, I suppose it's somewhat of a habit. Sorry about that. :oops:

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Offline Tany

Re: Juliet Paloni - Edited
« Reply #8 on: 21 Sep 2011, 02:28 pm »
Thank you for editing again!

I only mentioned spell-check to see if maybe it'd catch them. I didn't know if it would, but you caught the ones I had my eye on! :3 Unfortunately, Gryffindor (and Slytherin, curiously enough) is currently closed, so I'm going to go ahead and pop Juliet on the waiting list. If, at any time during your wait, you feel you can see her in another house feel free to edit accordingly and poke us here. <3

Offline Juliet Paloni

Re: Juliet Paloni - Waiting [G-1]
« Reply #9 on: 21 Sep 2011, 02:35 pm »
Thank you, ma'am! :biglove:

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Offline Tany

Re: Juliet Paloni - Waiting [G-1]
« Reply #10 on: 25 Sep 2011, 04:28 pm »
:approvedg: