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Kernac Alcott

Kernac Alcott - Approved [G]
« on: 15 Sep 2011, 06:53 am »
First and Last Name:Kernac Alcott

Bloodline:Muggleborn
Hair Color:Dark Brown
Eye Color:Brown
General Build:Average
Height:Tall

Birthplace:Plymouth, UK
Brief Childhood History:Born in Plymouth his parents Jamis, and Elly (a muggle) lived on a small farm in Plymouth. Once he was born though, they knew they would need more money to support a family, so they moved to London, where his father Jamis, became in Auror and a bodyguard to many important people in the ministry, though it didn't pay enough to support a large family. His mother wanted to take him back to the muggle world, and took him there for a few seasons a year when he was younger, because of this he is often a little torn between his identity as muggle, and his identity as a wizard. When Kernac was four his brother Alec was born, although he didn't get along with his little brother at first, because his brother got most of the attention, as he grew up he learned to get used to it. He eventually was highly interested in quidditch, although never having a broom he never got to play, he was at almost every match he could get too. As he got older he began to look for small jobs to support his family, and started off by working at Ollivander's organizing wands (without magic of course) but was fired when he misplaced a wand.
He once worked a quidditch supplies, but was fired when he rode their newest broom, a Firebolt behind their backs, breaking it when he went ten miles int the air, and then crashed back down at a hundred miles an hour.
He went through and through a few jobs, and was particularly good at writing things and submitting them to magazines. Though he was fired from this, when he wrote an article that obviously made the magazine he was writing for considered a bad job. From this point he stopped writing his stories and articles, giving it up all together, and hasn't written a story since.
Not finding any job worth his time, and nearing the age of 11, he asked his parents about Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry, which he had seen a flyer of. His parents thought it a great idea and bought his supplies early. As soon as he turned eleven, and school neared starting point, he was taken to train station nine and three-quarters, and from there went to Hogwarts.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic):He has leader like traits, but doesn't want to tell everyone else what to do all the time. He is a quick learner, and loves to tell about what he learns. He is very happy most of the time, but has a little of a bad temper. Trustworthy, and courageous. He is good at making friends, and excels in Defense Against The Dark Arts Spells, and Potions.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): He can sometimes be demanding, and has a little bit of a bad temper. Always trying to push his way, and at the same time fighting himself not to. He likes to take a few risks, but is otherwise too tied to following the rules. He is a little bit too trusting of others. He is horrible in herbology, and in divination. Can be extremely rude to those he doesn't like.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:Gryffindor. He's courageous, wise, and a little bit too honest. He likes to do good, but also has a very bad temper. Though he is experienced about most situations, he's more inexperienced when it come to magic, though through the education at Hogwarts school, he's sure that he'll become a great wizard.
« Last Edit: 26 Sep 2011, 01:33 pm by Tany »

Offline Ninjela

Re: Kernac Alcott
« Reply #1 on: 15 Sep 2011, 12:18 pm »
Hiya! Welcome to HPRPG :D

Before we can sort you, would you please add some more detail to the Childhood History section? We're really looking for two or three paragraphs about Kernac's childhood. Maybe tell us more about his relationship with his parents and brothers, or about some friends he had, that sort of thing.

Also, you say that his parents taught him a few spells, but children aren't allowed to do magic outside of school, so I'm going to ask that you remove that detail. They might have taught him magical theory, but they wouldn't have been able to teach him actual spells.

Once you've made these changes, go ahead and change the title of this thread from 'pending' to 'edited' and we can move on!

Nikki made the pretty!

Offline Sue

Re: Kernac Alcott - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 20 Sep 2011, 04:19 am »
Hi again. :D

As Ninjela said, we're looking for a couple of paragraphs in the History section.  :sweatdrop: What sort of mischief did he and his friends get up to? Why did he forget all of their names? What were his parents and siblings names? Just some more minor details so we can get to know Kernac a little better~

Switch your subject to Edited when you're finished again. :)

all my love for Tany

Offline Tany

Re: Kernac Alcott - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 24 Sep 2011, 07:19 pm »
Thank you for editing again!

Unfortunately, Gryffindor is currently closed, so I'm going to go ahead and pop Kernac on the waiting list. If, at any time during your wait, you feel you can see him in another house feel free to edit accordingly and poke us here. <3
« Last Edit: 24 Sep 2011, 07:21 pm by Tany »

Offline Tany

Re: Kernac Alcott - Waiting [G-1]
« Reply #4 on: 26 Sep 2011, 01:33 pm »
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