Topic: Lily Peters - Approved [G]

[Lily Peters]

First and Last Name: Lily Peters
 Bloodline: Pureblood
 Hair Color: ginger
Eye Color: dark brown
General Build: petite
Height: small
Birthplace: london  
Brief Childhood History: Lily lived in London with her parents at the age of about 3 they all moved to the highlands of Scotland to a small village known as Negalhirst. She was the youngest child on the island. Lily loved riding around the island on a boat with her father. At the age of five Lily went to the local muggle school were she made a couple of friends one especially called Ben Thomas. one day Ben left the island and Lily was heart broken.
Lily’s father is a fisherman and her mother makes things out of shells and sells them in a pretty shop by the sea. Since the age of about 6 Lily loves just to walk around the tiny island by herself but she prefers to horse ride and play on her broomstick.
When Lily got here letter she was over the moon. It was expected of course because Lily comes from a long line of wizards.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic):
Lily is good at potions. She has never quite gathered the art of wand waving but her potions always seem to work well. She manages to always get the right amount of ingredients for the right potion and she can always brew the right concoction.

Lily is confident and a bit of a know it all. She is never scared to stand up for herself. She always has an answer for everything. Sometimes Lily can come on a bit strong.

Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic):
Lily's weakness is transfiguration. she can never seem to get the thing to change into what ever its supposed. She just finds it really difficult and struggles a lot with it.

Lily is not very good at giving other people a chance. She tends to talk over people and flatten there character a bit. She doesn't really know she is doing its just a force of habit.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I think Lily belongs in gryffindor because she never is afraid to stand up for herself or others.

[Jayce]

Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG!

Before we can sort you, there are just a few things to attend to.

Firstly, your coding is a little wonky at the top.

Secondly, you say that Lily lived in London until she was three and then moved to the highlands of Scotland, yet you state that her birthplace was the highlands. I'm just a little confused by that. Was she born in Scotland, but then her family moved to London, England, and then move back? Or was she born in London? If you could clear that up, it would be fantastic.

Thirdly, we'd just like to know more about Lily in the history. What did she do growing up? Did she go to school? Did she have friends? What did she like to do for fun other than walking around? These are just some of the things you could expand on.

Fourthly, we'll need at least 2-3 personality strengths and weaknesses for Lily.

Fifthly, Divination isn't a class that Lily will take until her third year, so please give us a core-class that she will struggle with.

Once you've done that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

[Jayce]

Since Gryffindor is closed at the moment, I'm going to stick you onto the waiting list. If at any point you would like to change Lily's house, simply edit the sheet accordingly and reply here.

[Jayce]