Topic: Krisella Darkeyes - Approved [S]

[Krisella Darkeyes]

First and Last Name: Krisella Darkeyes
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Bloodline: Pure
Hair Color: Platinum blond
Eye Color: Grey
General Build: Petite
Height: tall

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Birthplace: London, England
Brief Childhood History: Tutored at an early age, Krisella is a bright young girl with an attitude. She is very mischievous, sly and sneaky, meaning she always has a cunning plan to get out of daunting tasks. From constant pressure with tutoring and being kept away from 'unworthy' people, Krisella doesn't have any friends yet but hopes to find some at Hogwarts that her parents would approve of.

She uses her natural charm to her advantage and always gets her way at home because of her parents spoiling her from an early age. Krisella's parents are high in society and have taught her all about 'blood statuses' and how half-bloods and muggleborns are beneath her. She is your stereotypical blond girly-girl.
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Strengths: Potions and DADA, Art and Singing this makes her quite confident in all she does. From constantly being surrounded by her tutor as a child and her parents throwing parties for people of high class, Krisella has developed good social skills. Because of growing up having a busy schedule Krisella finds it easy to be punctual and organised.

Weaknesses: Herbology because she doesn't like dirt, Divination because Krisella believes we make our own fate, Transfiguration because she believes things are made the way they are supposed to be, making friends because she has grown up to believe her friends have to be up to a certain standard.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I think Krisella should be in Slytherin because of her sneaky ways, also her family has always been placed in that house.

[Jayce]

Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG!

Before we can sort you, there are just a few things to attend to.

Can you tell us a bit more about September's history? We like at least 2-3 paragraphs in this section. In addition, I don't really thing being "a huge flirt" is that believable from an eleven year old or younger, so perhaps edit that portion out or reword it so it is more believable.

And we will need to know some personality strengths of Krisella's. Art and singing are things she does well, but really have nothing to do with her personality. Having confidence is a good one, but maybe give us one or two more? And maybe also give us one or two more weaknesses, since everyone has more than one.

Once you've done that, just change the topic from 'pending' to 'edited'!

On another note, the avatar you are currently using is not age-appropriate for Krisella. Keep in mind that she will be an eleven year old starting at Hogwarts and you will need to find a model that is close to that age. 

[Krisella Darkeyes]

I wasn't sure how re-post my sorting hat application so I just clicked modify. I hope that's alright.
Hope to hear from you soon.  X x

[Jayce]

You did it right. You're supposed to edit, not re-post.

And I'm afraid I'm still going to have to ask you expand more on Krisella's Strengths and Weaknesses. Like I said before, everyone has more than one strength or one weakness to them.

Once you've done that, just change the title again.

[Jayce]

Since Slytherin is closed at the moment, I'm going to stick you onto the waiting list. If at any point you would like to change Krisella's house, simply edit the sheet accordingly and reply here.

[Jayce]