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Victoria Rose Parker- Approved [S]
« on: 29 Jul 2011, 08:50 am »
First and Last Name: Victoria Rose Parker

Bloodline:Pureblood
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Dark Brown
General Build: petite
Height: tall

Birthplace: London, England

Brief Childhood History: Victoria was born to the modest, but still very pureblood, house of Parkin. While her family did not necessarily hate muggles, they didn't especially like them, or at least the majority of them.The family name was Parkin before the fall of Voldemort, and they were big supporters of He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named, however, after the fall her parents retreated to Spain and put Victoria in a boarding school in Britain so as to avoid her being around any potential drama. There was none, but the family changed it's name to Parker to avoid any mess. They were not around when Voldemort came back, because they didn't want to go through the mess when he eventually died, as they figured he would.

The Parkers moved along in upper-class Spanish society while Victoria learned to be a lady. That was, until she received her letter from Hogwarts. The Parkers had kept their English address on the side so no one would get suspicious about the Parkin's disappearance. On a routine trip to the English home to collect mail and belongings they might need from the house, Mr. Parker came across Victoria's letter. He was very wary about giving it to her, since her attendance at Hogwarts would possibly blow their cover. He thought it best in the end though, that giving it to her would cause less problems than ignoring it completely. He found, after sending the letter to her at the boarding school, that she had already received a copy there, and that the school had basically made a laughing stock of her. Protecting his daughter, he withdrew her from the school, and took her along her way to prepare her for Hogwarts. Being made a joke at the Muggle school, she sees Hogwarts as a new start, and wishes to become the best witch she can possibly be. She now spends her summers with her aunt Cleo in England, except on the off chance that she visits her parents in Spain.


Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Victoria is an excelled student and learner, is extremely trustworthy, and very organized and planned. She is very much a lady, but is not flimsy or fragile. She excells in Potions and Transfiguration.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): She tends to avoid her emotions and feelings, and can appear cold, but longs for an emotional relationship. Deep inside she wants to be loved, but wont let that affect her academic life if at all possible. Classes she does not excell in include Muggle Studies and Astronomy.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Slytherin. Victoria, while intelligent, witty, and capable, is more apt to use that intelligence and wit to be a very cunning student. While she doesn't believe in direct revenge, at least in the immediate sense, she is the type to sit around and meticulously plan her revenge out, sometimes waiting so long to do so that the offender doesn't even remember what they may have done.
« Last Edit: 31 Jul 2011, 02:07 pm by Jayce »
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Offline Sue

Re: Victoria Rose Parker
« Reply #1 on: 29 Jul 2011, 03:43 pm »
Hi and welcome to HPRPG. :D

First of all, I removed the color and font from your sheet, because that is very distracting.  :lol: We all use the default font here for everything other than character journals where you're allowed to use a different (readable!) font and color, and during special times when you're allowed to use NPCs. Just an FYI there. xD

We're also going to have to ask you to make a few changes. Victoria's family can be supporters of Voldemort, but they can not have been Death Eaters. All canon Death Eaters have been named, so we don't allow any new ones. (We get way too many people wanting to have death eater families, and their really weren't that many  :sweatdrop:)

Also, in order to attend Hogwarts, Victoria would have had to be born and raised in the UK. She couldn't have attended boarding school in Spain, even if it was kept under wraps. The Ministry knows.  :lol:


Once you've made your changes, switch your subject line from 'pending' to 'edited' :)

all my love for Tany

Re: Victoria Rose Parker-Edited
« Reply #2 on: 29 Jul 2011, 04:15 pm »
Sue,

Thank you for the help! I changed it so that she went to boarding school in England instead, and now spends her summers with her aunt, because her parents are very decidedly staying in Spain. They've pretty much worked themselves out of the Wizarding world and integrated themselves back into Muggle society so as to avoid drama. Tucking their tails behind them, I would say.
I also fixed it so that they weren't Death Eaters [thanks for that, I wasn't aware there really were so few, and kind of thought that most pureblood supporters would have helped in some manner, making them Death Eaters, but it was irrelevant to any future plot, really.]
PM Vic to play with her!

Offline Sue

Re: Victoria Rose Parker-Edited
« Reply #3 on: 29 Jul 2011, 06:31 pm »
people confuse Death Eaters and Voldemort supporters a lot.  :lol:

BUT, you're looking really good so far. I just have to ask you to change one more thing that I missed the first time around. :shifty: If you could please remove the exact year of her birth, that would be appreciated. It just gets confusing with the open time line, and with the way characters advance and all, it's hard to keep up with.

switch your titles again, and someone will come through and have a look. :D

all my love for Tany

Offline Jayce

Re: Victoria Rose Parker-Edited
« Reply #4 on: 30 Jul 2011, 10:41 pm »
Hi there!

Thank you for making the edits, but there is just one little thing left to attend to.

In the 'weaknesses' section, can you give us a core-class that Victoria would struggle with? This is because Muggle Studies and Divination are both classes that she won't take until her third year. ;)

Once you've done that, just switch the title again.

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Victoria Rose Parker- Edited
« Reply #5 on: 31 Jul 2011, 02:06 pm »
:approveds:

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski