Topic: Tyron Jones- Approved [S]

[Tyron Jones]

First and Last Name: Tyron Jones
Bloodline: Half-Blood
Hair Color: Dirty Blond
Eye Color: Jade Green
General Build: Avarage
Height: Short
Birthplace: London, England
Brief Childhood History: Tyron`s mother died giving birth to him. His mother was a witch and hadn't told her husband,so Tyron being a wizard surprised him. Tyron's father worked at the local news station. He wasn't home very often because he was on the late news. He tried his best to do things with Tyron, but he never had the time.Tyron was very excited to be going to Hogwarts. He thought that maybe there he could make friends.The neighborhood children used to bully him allot, so he didn't have many friends. Because of this constent bullying, Tyron became cruel. Whenever someone wanted to be his friend, he was mean to them.
Strengths(Including Personal and Academic): Tyron is clever, sly, and almost always gets what he wants. He can get along with almost any animal with fur.He will probably do best at Herbology and Care of Magical Creatures
Weaknesses(Including Personal and Academic): Tyron can be mean sometimes so he doesn't have many friends. He also procrastinates allot. Subjects he probably won't do good at are Potions and Transfiguration
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Tyron should be in Slytherin because of his ambition,cleverness, and because his mother's entire family were in Slytherin.

[Sue]

Hi and welcome to HPRPG.

Before we can proceed, I have to ask that you go back and copy the  ~*official*~ hprpg character sheet. There's a link to it in the top block of text on this forum, so it's not easy to find. Once you've done that, you can fill it in properly, and we can go from there.

When you've made your changes, please switch your subject line from 'pending' to 'edited' and someone will come and have another look~

[Jayce]

Hi there!

Thank you for making the edits, but there are still a few things that need to be attended to.

We would like to know more about Tyron's childhood. We require at least 2-3 paragraphs in this section. Some areas you could expand on are: Tyron's relationship with his father, muggle schooling, friends, activities he did, etc.

And then, please go back and fix the grammar and spelling errors.

Once you've done that, just switch the title again.

[Tyron Jones]

Ok. I've added some things to Tyron's childhood.

[Jayce]

Since Slytherin is closed at the moment, I'm going to stick you onto the waiting list. If at any point you would like to change Tyron's house, simply edit the sheet accordingly and reply here.  

[Tyron Jones]

Who's Andrew?

[Jayce]