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Bryan Mason - Approved [S]
« on: 26 Jul 2011, 12:30 pm »
First and Last Name:Bryan Mason

Bloodline:Pure-blood
Hair Color:Dark brown
Eye Color:Blue
General Build:Average
Height:Average

Birthplace:London, England
Brief Childhood History:Bryan comes from a noble family of pure-blood wizards.
The roots of the family roots from 16th century and since then they were known to be strange and highly feared people. Not much is known about Mason family but there are rumors of some practicing dark and forbidden magic, however it was never proved. Angelina Mason, Bryan's mother is known by her antique shop somewhere around Blackborth in North England, it is said that Masons possess highly valuable antiques from which some could be extremely valuable but not much is known about it ether. Bryan's father Godwin Mason was accused of experimenting with forbidden brews and plants
and was sent to Azkaban prison however being highly influenced family he spent nearly 3 months there before he was released and sent home. As for young Bryan his childhood was rather busy since he was bound to help his father with his potion shop also located somewhere around Blackborth in North England. Bryan developed some serious potion brewing skills during his childhood, his potential is yet to be seen in Hogwarts. He used to spend endless nights reading books about magical brews and during these years he developed among many other few very complicated potions for his age. Brew that allows him once digested talk to people in a such way that people find him very polite and nice to have around them. Brew that is particularly important to Bryan since he has poor socialising skills. The other important potion he recently created has yet unknown effect other then having this weird sensation in his head, never less he is always cautious when creating new stuff, you never know what might explode back at your face from that cauldron.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic):Bryan is extremly talented for brewing potions and taking care of plants. During all there days in his childhood that he spent with his father in his potion shop, his father thought him a lot about potions and plants. However as he never played with any other children in the
neighbourhood so he developed this cold and passive approach to everything. He finds it actually the only positive thing about himself, since it keeps him out of troubles and helps him keep his calm. Also another thing unusual about Bryan is that he likes to carry around vials full of his own brews, usually in his pockets.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Bryan is not good with talking to people, he tends to have long pauses between his words, not because he is dull but because he is uncomfortable talking to people. He is also quite afraid that his skills with general magic and charms will not go so well since he was never into magic itself. Perhaps charms, transfigurations and other similar stuff will require more practice then usual?
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Slytherin - He is a pure-blood wizard and a bit different from other children, he prefers cold, dark and bitter places because most of the potions should be kept in dark places anyway,
what place more perfect then dungeons of Hogwarts itself. Bryan is also quite cunning young boy, in one occasion he was bullied by some kids in the neighbourhood so he decided to trick them with some of the trickster brews, one of them ended up having pig ears for 2 weeks while the other one was surprisingly haunted by bees. Since that day his parents concluded that it is for his own best to stay at home at all cost and become homeschooled, since then Bryan has lost almost all his socialising skills with kids his age. His passion for potions makes him quite ambitious kid, his hope is to become a master of potions one day, and to brew something he will be known for. Time will show, if he will become successful or not.

((I am willing to wait till place in Slytherin opens up.))
« Last Edit: 27 Jul 2011, 07:58 pm by Jayce »

Offline Jayce

Re: Bryan Mason
« Reply #1 on: 26 Jul 2011, 02:43 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG!

Before we get you sorted, there are just a few things to attend to.

Firstly, we'd like to learn more about Bryan in the history. We get a lot of good information on his parents, but only a sentence or two on Bryan himself! What other things did he do growing up? Did he go to school? Did he have friends? These are just some of the things you can consider adding onto. ;)

Secondly, can you give us one or two more weaknesses of Bryan's? In addition, it would be preferable if you simply edited out the portion of underage magic completely. He can still be bad at Charms, but simply edit it so it says that in the future when he gets to Hogwarts, he will find himself struggling with it.

Finally, while it's great that you want Bryan to be a Slytherin, the 'why' portion does seem to be lacking. What of the Slytherin traits — ambitious, shrewd, cunning, strong leaders, and achievement-oriented — does Bryan encompass? One doesn't necessarily need to love potions to belong in that particular house.

Once you've done that, please change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'! :biglove:
« Last Edit: 27 Jul 2011, 03:51 am by Jayce »

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Re: Bryan Mason - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 27 Jul 2011, 02:50 am »
Edited.

Offline Sue

Re: Bryan Mason - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 27 Jul 2011, 05:20 am »
Thank you for making those edits. :D I'll stick you on the waiting list for now, but if you change your mind and want Bryan to be in another house, you can reply here and we'll get you sorted~

all my love for Tany

Offline Jayce

Re: Bryan Mason - Waiting [S-1]
« Reply #4 on: 27 Jul 2011, 07:58 pm »
:approveds:

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski