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Offline Scarlett Clark

Scarlett Clark - Approved [G]
« on: 01 Feb 2012, 02:55 pm »
First and Last Name: Scarlett Clark

Bloodline: Muggle Born
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Brown
General Build: petite
Height: Average

Birthplace: Ashbourne, Republic of Ireland
Brief Childhood History: Growing up as an only child, naturally her parents would spoil her. Her father, Rory Clark, owned and operated the first running cinematic theater in Ashbourne that opened when Scarlett was four. Every weekend, he would offer to bring Scarlett to work with him, but each offer she declined. She was open about the fact that she'd rather spend more time with her mother,Ingrid. But her father took no offense to it and understood completely. As perfect as the family may seem, Rory and Ingrid did have times where they would argue. And whenever they did, all Scarlett had to do was escape from the house and wander the streets, lost in her own world. But of course, she'd never scurry far. She'd make it to the end of the street and sit on the bench over looking the water until she felt her parents had had enough time to calm themselves and make up. Only then would she leave the bench by the water. This was her safe place and it remains so to this day.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): She loves to learn. Whenever her mother would come up with a new story to tell, Scarlett made sure to drop everything and hurried to hear. She's mostly a visual learner, seeing as she grew up with her mother talking with her hands. Naturally, she's very curious. When she received her letter, she began to look more into it. A class she would be fair in would be "Care for Magical creatures" and "Defense Against the Dark arts".
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): If it's anything but visual teaching, Scarlett probably won't get it. She's very outgoing and happy towards everyone she meets, which to some that could be a bit too much. As said above, she's curious. She'd most likely be seen getting into trouble for pestering a ghost or treading on forbidden territory. Classes she would most likely struggle in would be "Potions" and "Charms"
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: It took some time for thinking, but I feel she would be in Gryffindor. She's daring, always willing to push the limits to get what's deserved. Push the limits, but not passed.
« Last Edit: 14 Feb 2012, 02:51 pm by Tany »

Offline Jayce

Re: Scarlett Clark
« Reply #1 on: 05 Feb 2012, 12:15 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can sort you, there are just a few things to attend to.

For the 'general build' and 'height' sections, please use one of the three adjectives provided for you on the official character sheet. Please also remove the reference to the specific year in the history, since timelines can end up being very loose here at HPRPG. ;)

I'm also going to ask you to use a different word to describe how Scarlett felt about her parent's arguing. There's nothing wrong with the fact that her parents fight, of course, because naturally all couples do, but using the word 'safe' seems to imply that the arguing consisted of more than just harsh words.

And finally, please provide specific Hogwarts classes for Scarlett's academic strengths and weaknesses.

Once you've done that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Scarlett Clark - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 06 Feb 2012, 12:28 pm »
You've seemed to fix everything except...

Please also remove the reference to the specific year in the history, since timelines can end up being very loose here at HPRPG.

It's honestly a lot easier to simply say her father opened up the theatre 'a few years back' or when 'Scarlett was eight' or whatever age she was. This is because you may end up advancing Scarlett to year three within a year and then she'd be thirteen/fourteen and then having said '2009' in your sheet would make no sense.

Once you've fixed that, just swap the title again.

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Scarlett Clark - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 06 Feb 2012, 01:34 pm »
Gryffindor house is currently closed at the moment. You will be placed on the waiting list, but if at any point you decide you would like your character to be in another house, just edit the sheet accordingly and reply here.

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Tany

Re: Scarlett Clark - Waiting [G-1]
« Reply #4 on: 14 Feb 2012, 02:51 pm »
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