Topic: Wiath Snow - Approved [R]

[Wiath Snow]

First and last name: Wiath Snow

Bloodline: Pure

Hair colour: Very light blond, almost white ; -)

Eye colour: blue

General build: petite

Height: short

Birthplace: Hastings

Brief childhood history:
Wiath was born in the town of Hastings. At birth the doctor immediately detected that something was different about the boy. His skin was whiter then everything the doctor had seen before on little children. When Wiath grew older his parents saw that his skin remained very pale and that his hair was very light blond, almost white. At the age of four his parents started teaching him reading and writing and they immediately saw that he was a quick learner. It took him only one year to read and write.

At the age of five, Wiath and his mom were at the local groceries store to do some shopping’s. Wiath was asked to wait at the door because his mother had forgotten something small, and went back in the store to get it. When his mother was inside, some boys came to Wiath and started mocking him about his pale skin and almost white hair. They called him names like “vampire” and “old man”. After that experience Wiath never went outside again, because he was afraid of what the other children would say to him. So he lived the first eleven years of his live at home with his parents.

Now at the age of eleven, he finally got his letter for Hogwarts. His parents thought he would be happy he could go there, but he was tremendously afraid. In the period he lived only in the safety of his household he grew enormously shy. He became afraid of the outside world and didn’t want to go to Hogwarts. After two weeks his parents were finally able to talk him into it, but Wiath made them promise that they would write him every day. When they went to Diagon Alley to buy Wiath’s stuff, people immediately began to point at him because of his light-blond hair. When it was time to go to Hogwarts, Wiath felt incredibly lonely and afraid.
 
Strengths:
 Wiath is a very fast learner because it is one of the only things he really enjoys. Besides that he is also very strong at making huge projects on his own. He loves making potions, he never made a real one yet, but he always played potions teacher with his dad. Beside this huge interest in potions he also likes herbology
 
Weaknesses:
 Because of his pale skin and almost white hair, wiath was always mocked by other kids. So he grew incredibly shy and is really bad at making friends, because he had no experience at all. Because of this he is really bad in defence against the dark arts, he is afraid of doing everything wrong in front of the whole class. He also doesn’t like astronomy, because he doesn’t like being outside at night.

What house does your character belong in and why?
I think my character belongs in ravenclaw because he is very clever and eager to learn. He also is a very fast learner and can think of creative ways to deal with problems

[Tany]

Heya Wiath and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need editing. First, Wiath is more than welcome to be extremely pale with really, really light blond hair; see, anti-pigmentia doesn't exactly exist. ^^; The closest to that would be 'albino' and that doesn't just effect hair, or skin, or eyes- it effects everything and since you just want Wiath to be really pale with light hair, it'd be much easier to just leave it as that: he's really pale and his hair is really light blond.

One small thing in his history for now, since the other things that need to be edited here ought to be changed when you change his hair color: could you remove the exact year he was born? The timeline at HPRPG is rather liquid-y and characters age a different paces due to our advancement guidelines, so the year is never exactly set in stone. <3

Additionally, can you remove the (personality strengths) and so on from the strengths and weakness portions? We ask that those sections are done in paragraph form, not list form, and can be written to where we'll understand which is what without specifying. Feel free to check out some approved applications if you need a visual idea of what we're looking for here.

Lastly, though I'm not sure why, you cut down the ~*Official HPRPG Character Sheet*~ to just 'house' -- you'll have to add the exact wording here --but we still need the house of your choice for Wiath as well as 'why' you think he belongs in that house.

Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

[Wiath Snow]

I will change the fings you said ASAP. im at school right now so i cant do it right now :P

The post is edited, please tell me if anything still isnt ok

[Tany]

I'm going to go ahead and approve you despite one thing I want to note-- you mentioned when they went to Diagon to get his supplies people stared and pointed; I just want you to keep in mind that these are witches and wizards and I'm sure they've seen some weirder stuff. ;3 (I mean, Voldemort doesn't have a nose.) <3