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Chelsea Scott

Chelsea Scott - Denied
« on: 02 Dec 2011, 12:52 am »
First and Last Name: Chelsea Scott
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Bloodline: Muggleborn
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Blue
General Build: Average
Height: Average
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Birthplace: London.
Brief Childhood History: Chelsea is a Muggleborn, so she had never heard of magic before her letter arrived, and lived with her mother and father in a small house in London. She has two older brothers, but none of them received a letter for Hogwarts, making her the only witch in the family. She also went to school before Hogwarts and has many Muggle friends.
At school, she was a social butterfly, and it was believed she would go to a prestigious secondary school before the Hogwarts letter arrived.
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Strengths (At least three, including Personality and Academic): Academically, she would do good at Transfiguration and Charms.
Personally, she stands for what she believes in, she is a very calm person, she is also hardworking and an optimist.
Weaknesses (At least three, including Personality and Academic):
Academically, she would do poor at Herbology and History of Magic.
Personally, she can’t lie or cheat without turning herself in, is not good at comforting people and she can be quite selfish.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:
I feel like she has snippets of mostly every house there is, because she stands up for herself and her friends and speaks her mind like a Gryffindor would do, she is calm and thinks twice, considering everything before doing anything, like a Ravenclaw, is honest and hardworking like a Hufflepuff, and she can be selfish and craves power sometimes, like a Slytherin.
But if it were to choose one house only, I’d say she would be either a Hufflepuff or Ravenclaw. Third option would be Gryffindor, but less for Slytherin.
« Last Edit: 18 Dec 2011, 11:09 pm by Jayce »

Offline Jayce

Re: Chelsea Scott
« Reply #1 on: 04 Dec 2011, 09:21 am »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can get you sorted, there are just a few things to attend to.

We require a solid 2-3 paragraphs for the History. So please expand on what you have already provided. Perhaps tell us more about the relationship she has with her family members or the friends she had at school. Could you also expand on the great characteristics you've listed for us in her strengths and weaknesses? Just explain why they are what they are in relation to Chelsea.

Once you've done that, just change your title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Chelsea Scott - Pending
« Reply #2 on: 18 Dec 2011, 11:09 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski