Topic: Kajina Lin - Approved [R]

[Kajina Lin]

First and Last Name: Kajina Lin
Bloodline:Unknown
Hair Color:  Black
Eye Color:  Blue-grey-ish
General Build:  Average ..
Height: Average ..
Birthplace:  Bedford, East of England
Brief Childhood History: Kajina Lin is born in Bedford with her mother. She has never known her father and her mother refuses to talk about him, so Kajina doesn't know if she's muggle-born or halfblood. When she was younger she couldn't understand why her father wasn't there, why he would abandon them. Now she has learned to live with the fact that she doesn't know anything about her father.. not even his name.
Her relationship to her mother is great. They do a lot of things together, since she is not really that old; Kajina was born the year her mother turned 19.
Kajina had, until she got her letter from Hogwarts, been attending a school close to where she lived. At that school she had gotten five best friends. She loved them and they did everything together; almost like she did with her mother.
Strengths (Including Personality and Academic):  She's trustworthy and her humor is sometimes kind of perverted, but it's not much. She laughs a lot, and sometimes because of something really stupid. She's linguistic and mostly she gets high grates, depending on the subject and she likes to read ..
She'd probably do well in Potions, Charms and Care of Magical Creatures.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): she has a tendency to be negative and get depressed over small things; probably because of the lack of father figure in her life.
In class she doesn't say much, it's mostly the written assignments she's good at. She'd probably not do well in History of Magic, Herbology and Flying.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: In a way she would belong in Ravenclaw, because she is smart and because she likes to read she knows a lot about.. well, a lot.. She likes to get new information and she can never really get enough ..
But sometimes she likes to be mean if the opportunity is there.

[Tany]

Heya Kajina and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need editing. First, can you fix the coding so the entire application isn't in the bold tag? The only bits that should be bold, for easy reading, are the categories: First and Last Name: Kajina Lin. Additionally, we ask that you use one of the three given adjectives for the 'general build' and 'height' area rather than exact measurements. ^^~

As for her history, we don't get too much about Kajina, save for her uncertainty over her blood line (just a question: why doesn't the mother know?), and we're looking for information on her childhood history. ;3 So if you could maybe toss in some more information there: how was she raised, did she attend a school prior to Hogwarts, did she have any friends, what sort of things did she do for fun...

Also, we're looking for a minimum of three strengths and weaknesses, respectively, both academic and personality. ^^; Everyone has more than one strength and weakness, after all! And, once you've added more here, make sure you add in some 'why's behind them to flesh it out rather than leaving it to be list-like.

Once you've made the above edits just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited' and we'll continue from there~

[Tany]

Thank you for editing~!

Once more small thing (my fault for not being specific), for 'academic strengths/weaknesses' we're looking for which classes at Hogwarts you expect Kajina to do well in and poor. ^^~ So if you could specify a few of those for each part, that'd be swell.

Edit// And maybe give us another reason why she belongs in Ravenclaw other than the basic 'because she's smart'.

You know the drill with the title~

[Tany]