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Offline Serena Anna Holloway

Serena Anna Holloway - Approved [R]
« on: 17 Nov 2011, 10:34 am »
/Note for the Staff: Hi! I don’t know whether non native speakers could have character, but I would like to join to practice language and have some fun. I’m Hungarian, having a bilingual education, and I need practice. So I wrote the Character Sheet, and hope you can sort me. I hope I have only few grammar mistakes, and sorry because of them!! :)/

First and Last Name: Serena Anna Holloway

Bloodline:Half-blood
Hair Color: Blond
Eye Color: Blue
General Build: Petite
Height: Average

Birthplace:London, UK
Brief Childhood History:
Serena was born in London. Her mother, Anna Kovács was a Hungarian muggle, who moved to the UK to find a good job and learn English language. At that time, she met with a gentleman, named Robert Holloway. It was love for first sight. After a short engagement they got married, and they had Serena as the first and only child. She was treated very well, as she was the only child.
Serena attended to a normal muggle school that she loved. She was a good student, she liked learning and having friends. However, there were some problems with her: sometimes strange things happened around her, so it was clear, that she is a witch. Her father taught her some things about Magic. As a result of the difference in her parents’ mother tongue, she can speak English and Hungarian properly. She loved to spend the holidays in Hungary, with her grandparents. They were surprised at Magic, but they accepted it. She loves the culture and the country, and she is proud that she is Hungarian in a way as well.
At the age of ten, she got excited about Hogwarts. She waited for the letter every day, even if her father told her that she gets it in summer.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic):
Serena is a creative and receptive person, she likes to know everything about everything and everyone. She can be really polite and cheerful as well, it depends on the situation. She loves and respects Hungarian culture and language. She is interested in Potions and Herbology, just as her father did. She loves drawing, and she is good in it.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic):
Serena is really stubborn. If somebody rude with her, her behavior becomes cold and rude until the person who offended her, apologize. Sometimes she thinks that she is superior to ignorant people, but not muggle-borns or whatever, she doesn't care about blood. She is afraid of amphibians, reptiles and spiders, so she is afraid of Care of Magical Creatures.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:
I reckon that Serena would fit in all of the Houses, except Slytherin. Maybe the best choice would be Ravenclaw, because of her thirst for knowledge.
« Last Edit: 18 Nov 2011, 06:02 pm by Tany »

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Offline Sue

Re: Serena Anna Holloway
« Reply #1 on: 17 Nov 2011, 05:49 pm »
You're definitely welcome to play here, but please be advised that we do encourage proper grammar and spelling and such, so it's definitely better if you are fluent in English. :)

There are a few things I'll need you to edit before we can continue, though.  :sweatdrop: All students who attend Hogwarts must be born AND raised in the UK in order to attend, so you'll have to remove the part about moving to Hungary. It's more our rule than a canon rule, because too many people have tried to slide by and make exceptions. She's welcome to VISIT Hungary though during the holiday breaks. :D

Once you've made your changes, please switch your title from 'pending' to 'edited' and someone will come along and take a look. Welcome to HPRPG! :D

all my love for Tany

Offline Tany

Re: Serena Anna Holloway-Edited
« Reply #2 on: 18 Nov 2011, 06:02 pm »
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