Topic: Aster McKenna - Denied

[Aster McKenna]

First and Last Name: Aster McKenna
Bloodline: Halfblood
Hair Color: Long fiery red hair with a few curls. She usually wears it down unless she goes out into the forest. Then she will put it in a ponytail.
Eye Color: Bright blue eyes with long eyelashes. Her eyes are her favorite part of her face. If you look deep into her eyes you can see the hurt she struggles with.
General Build: Aster is generally slim. Not too skinny but skinnier than most of the girls. She weighs about 123lbs and measures in at about 5’ 5”
Height: 5' 5"
Birthplace: Unknown
Brief Childhood History: Living at the orphanage wasn’t easy for Aster, she was a very lost girl. She is quiet the individual but she isn't sure where her life is going or what she wants to do with it. She has always begged for attention, but since finding out she was a witch just before her eleventh birthday it's gotten even worse. Then she was adopted, that didn’t help either. As much as Herbert & Elanor tried to love her and give her attention, she felt they just had to… not that they wanted to. Since she found out she was a witch, now she wants to know where her parents came from and if they were magical as well. Having no records of her family she feels so alone.

At age 8 she met Kary, another girl who came to the orphanage. They have been best friends since that day. They aren't as close as they used to be since Aster has entered the magic world and isn't going to school at Hogwarts. Without Kary by her side, the magic world was a complete surprise when she entered it. She always knew she was different but never really understood it till her visit from the Headmaster at Hogwarts.

Aster really doesn't know who she is and is trying to find her place in life in both the magical and muggle world. The quest for knowledge about her parents still haunts her, but there is no progress in finding out who they were. Until then, Aster is just barely getting through life.
Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): She is very skilled at almost anything she puts her mind to, not that many people know because she doesn’t apply herself. Best thing she does is caring for magical and non magical creatures of all classifications. Aster is super creative, loves to draw and write, when she gets around to it.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Aster is a wicked hot head and very competitive. She likes to get her own way and when she doesn‘t she tends to throw a fit. She is crazy when she drinks, which is most of the time. She can‘t control herself when she is drunk. Aster is really a lost, disturbed girl who craves attention. She’s also a loner, doesn’t really have any friends.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Ravenclaw, because she is smart and very talented. She is just a lost girl looking for someone who she can really rely on.

[Ninjela]

Hello, and welcome to HPRPG!

Before we can sort you, there are some things I need to address in your character sheet.

1) For 'General Build' and 'Height' we ask that you only use one of the three terms provided in the Official Character Sheet (Petite, Average, or Large for build; Short, Average, or Tall for height). Please edit these sections accordingly.

2) For Strengths and Weaknesses, we ask that you specify one or two classes that Aster will be good at or struggle with.

3) Under Weaknesses, you talk about Aster having a drinking habit. However, Aster is only 11 years old as she enters Hogwarts. At that age, it is unrealistic that she has experienced drunkenness, let alone that she drinks 'most of the time.' Furthermore, Hogwarts is a strict boarding school, and it is unlikely that she would have access to such drinks, especially as a first year.

More importantly, HPRPG is a family-friendly environment with a wide range of members, and as such we ask that you avoid topics which might be offensive. This includes topics like heavy drinking.

Please make the above changes, and then change the title of this thread from 'pending' to 'edited.' We can go on from there!

[Jayce]

As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes!