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Carson Peters

Carson Peters - Approved [G]
« on: 10 Sep 2011, 11:44 am »
First and Last Name: Carson Peters

Bloodline: Half-Blood
Hair Color: short, dark black
Eye Color: dark, creamy brown.
General Build: average
Height: tall

Birthplace: Edinburgh, Scotland
Brief Childhood History: Carson was born in Scotland, and lived there until he was five. His mother, a lovely blond named Lidia. His mother, a handsome black mam, had anger issues. His parents had decided on skipping kindergarten, and he would start first grade the year after. It was at this age that his parents had finally agreed to split. Carson had been a 'late bloomer' as his mother had always told him, and he hadn't been walking, talking or anything much until later than the average child. His father hadn't liked it very much and had started yelling at him, the man treated him horribly and his parents had been arguing for a while. Thinking back, it really was a relief, the pain had finally ended.

His dad took his two year old brother with him, and his mother took him, They moved throughout Scotland until he was nine. His mother had been having trouble holding down a job, while raising a young boy, so we could never keep a house for very long. It was only at the age of nine that Carson's mother decided to pick the two of them up and move them out of Scotland. She was under the impression that she was being followed around the country by her ex-husband, and so her solution was to move away. She then moved them to their current location, Cardiff.

Carson didn't get along with many people well in muggle school, but this was mainly because he liked to tell them what to do, but wouldn't tell them anything about himself. He did know one boy, a year younger than him, who he got off with pretty well. The boy's name is Greggory. Greg - for short - moved away three months before he got his letter, so for the time before school started was pretty alone for him.

Carson hasn't seen any family other than his mother since he was six years old, and, from the situation, he doesn't think he will. At least not for a while.


Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Carson is a born leader and is very outgoing, he will make conversation with just about anyone. He is also very good a reading other people - or profiling them. He is a strong boy - for his age - as well. Carson is also good with puzzles, he takes clues into account and can peace them together easily. Carson has always shown an interest to Potions and Defence Against The Dark Arts, these classes I think he'll be best at.

Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Carson has a hard time trusting others, though many put their trust in him, he is also very weak when it comes to getting close to people, because he fears they will leave him. He is very overprotective of those close to him, for example his mother, and this can get in the way of many things. Carson has a horrible memory, and his schoolwork leaves much to the imagination. It isn't that he isn't smart, because in most cases he can know the answer, but he is just lazy. Carson will not be very good at history of magic or muggle studies.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I feel that Carson belongs in the Gryffindor House. I feel this way because Carson has the qualities of the Griffindor in his leadership and his outspokenness.
« Last Edit: 17 Sep 2011, 04:20 pm by Tany »

Offline Jayce

Re: Carson Peters
« Reply #1 on: 11 Sep 2011, 12:17 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG!

Before we can get you sorted, there are just a few things to attend to.

For the general build and height sections, please just use one of the three words provided for you on the official character sheet.

Can you also give us more about Carson's history? Why did his parents divorce? Did he visit his father and brother? Did he attend a muggle school? Did he have friends? These are just a few questions you can answer to expand this section. In addition, I'm confused as to why his mother thought they couldn't live in Scotland anymore because of Hogwarts? Students who reside all over the United Kingdom and Ireland attend Hogwarts.

In the strengths and weaknesses section, please remove the sub-headers you have and combine both the personality and academics parts together into one paragraph. We will also need one or two more personality strengths and specific Hogwarts classes that Carson will succeed in and struggle with for the academic portions.

Once you've done that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

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Offline Sue

Re: Carson Peters - Editied
« Reply #2 on: 13 Sep 2011, 04:38 am »
Hi again :D

Just a few more things I need for you to adjust. The subject of mental illness is a very sensitive one that we generally don't allow people to play out. So, please remove the reference to schizophrenia. (that's the correct spelling~)

And speaking of spelling.  :sweatdrop: I also have to ask that you go through and proofread your sheet, since I caught a few spelling and grammar errors that made the sheet a little difficult to read.

Also, since Carson is going to be 11 years old when you start playing him (all characters start as first year) the avatar you're using for him is not appropriate. We require that any image you use to represent your character looks close to their current age. :D

When you've made your changes, switch your title from 'pending' to 'edited' again~

all my love for Tany

Offline Tany

Re: Carson Peters -Edited
« Reply #3 on: 16 Sep 2011, 05:52 pm »
Thank you again for editing! :biglove:

Unfortunately Gryffindor is currently closed so I'm going to go ahead and pop Carson on the waiting list. <3 If, at any time during your wait, you feel you could see Carson in another house feel free to edit the sheet accordingly and poke us here.

<3

Offline Tany

Re: Carson Peters - Waiting [G-1]
« Reply #4 on: 17 Sep 2011, 04:20 pm »
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