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Offline Evangeline James

Evangeline James - Approved [G]
« on: 13 Jan 2011, 04:26 pm »
First and Last Name: Evangeline (Eva) James

Bloodline: Pureblood
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
General Build: Average
Height: Average

Birthplace: Lancaster, England
Brief Childhood History: Evangeline is the youngest daughter of Sarah and Collin James. She has two older brothers and one older sister. As a child, she was the reckless one. Always the impulsive one. She never really did what she was told, and hated it when her older siblings went off to Hogwarts and she was stuck at home.

As a child, her brothers were overly obsessed with quidditch and soon, she became just as enthusiastic. She loved the game. Her brothers taught her, with many failed attempts. Her sister, howver, got her interested in reading, and writing. She's grown up to be a fanatic about it, and eventually her parents bought her a filing cabinet to keep all of her parchment in. Growing up, her siblings were her best friends. Strangely, she always hung around more boys than she did girls.

Her first magical experience was when she accidentally made her father's coffee cup float. It hovered in the air for a second, but when she noticed it, she jumped and it fell. It spilled all over her father and the table.As she grew up, her siblings always tried to prepare her for Hogwarts. When she finally got her letter, she and the rest of her family were all excited. Her sister the most, because her little sister would finally be able to go to Hogwarts

Strengths:
Eva's skilled in Defense Against The Dark Arts. She's pretty good at defensive spells. She's a brave, bold person, never afraid to try new things. Also, she's pretty good at Charms. Mainly because she's skilled at wand movements. Lastly she's a loyal friend. There until the end.
Weaknesses:
Eva's terrible at Potions. Dont drink anything she makes, you'll probably either break out in warts, or explode. She hates Herbology. Plants just dont like her. She's headstrong and stubborn. She cant be caged. Also she's a compulsive daydreamer. Unless she's interested in the subject, she'll usually look off into the distance and forget about everything. Lastly, there's a fire in her soul. When someone makes her angry. She can sometimes come off rude.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I believe that she should be sorted into Gryffindor. She's always brave enough to try new things, and she's loyal to the end. When she makes a friend, she sticks with them. Always defending them when they're in trouble. When she sets her mind to something, she won't give up, no matter how much you try to persuade her to quit.
« Last Edit: 13 Jan 2011, 10:44 pm by Tany »

Offline Meg

Re: Evangeline James
« Reply #1 on: 13 Jan 2011, 06:10 pm »
Hiya! Welcome to HPRPG!  :biglove: We're so glad you've joined our little corner of the role-playing world. Before we can get Evangeline sorted, I need you to make some changes to her sheet.

First, could you add a little more to her Childhood History? Just a few more details. Where did she go to school? Friends? Grandparents? First magical experience?

Second, could you remove her Strengths/Weaknesses from the list and format them in complete sentences. Please write them in complete sentences.

Thank you!  :biglove: After you've made the changes in your sheet, edit the subject line of your post from 'Pending' to 'Edited' and it will be looked at ASAP! =D

Offline Evangeline James

Re: Evangeline James - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 13 Jan 2011, 09:31 pm »
I dont know if I did right but it's edited.

Offline Tany

Re: Evangeline James
« Reply #3 on: 13 Jan 2011, 10:06 pm »
Second, could you remove her Strengths/Weaknesses from the list and format them in complete sentences. Please write them in complete sentences.

-points at quote-

I believe Meg meant complete sentences in ~paragraph form and to remove the listing entirely. ^^ Once you've done that just do the same as last time with the changing of the topic title.

Welcome to HPRPG from myself, as well. <3

Offline Evangeline James

Re: Evangeline James - Pending
« Reply #4 on: 13 Jan 2011, 10:23 pm »
oh, thanks. I was kinda confused

Offline Evangeline James

Re: Evangeline James - Pending
« Reply #5 on: 13 Jan 2011, 10:30 pm »
Done. Again, thanks for the help.

Offline Tany

Re: Evangeline James - Pending
« Reply #6 on: 13 Jan 2011, 10:44 pm »
WELCOME TO HOGWARTS!
You're as bold as they come
And brave as you are,
Better be...

GRYFFINDOR~!