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Offline Miriam Milea

Miriam Milea - Approved [R]
« on: 18 Dec 2010, 09:41 pm »
First and Last Name: Miriam Milea

Bloodline: Pureblood
Hair Color: auburn
Eye Color: dark brown
General Build: petite
Height: average

Birthplace: Wick, Scotland
Brief Childhood History: Miriam was the youngest born child of Adam and Livia Milea. She grew up with the company of her older brothers Alec and Avery, in and out of the public school she attended and for the most part avoided interaction with muggles, though she did participate in the after-school football games with her classmates.

Her parents both completed there education at Durmstrang and partially through their influence Miriam became interested in defense against the dark arts. Living with the company of two older boys she was introduced to quite a rough version of quidditch as she watched her brothers attempt many times to knock each other of their brooms (though it didn't matter much as they flew so low their feet almost hit the ground), she became quite intrigued by the sport but was only ever a spectator to her brothers botched version and the few professional matches her family attended.

She was very fortunate as a child, never having to worry about money, or family feuds and was fairly well-rounded. Her parents were also very keen to teach her about her ancestry, vacationing to Romania every Summer to support family ties with relatives.
 


Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Miriam is logical and ambitious, setting her goals as high as she sees fits. She is interested in transfiguration, and astronomy but does have a strong knowledge about defense against the dark arts.

Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Miriam has an overly-competitive attitude, and stubborn personality, leading her to create some-what uncomfortable situations with her desire to be right. Academically she would not excel at potions, care of magical creatures or herbology as she enjoys learning from a book rather than hands on studies.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I feel Miriam belongs to Ravenclaw because she encourages solving problems through intellect and prizes intelligence.
« Last Edit: 20 Dec 2010, 12:31 pm by Eris »
Maybe I exist, to find out why I exist

Offline Meg

Re: Miriam Milea
« Reply #1 on: 18 Dec 2010, 10:59 pm »
Hiya!  :biglove: Welcome to HPRPG! We're so glad you have joined us.  :squish: Before we can get Miriam sorted, I need you to make a few edits to her character sheet.

First, with the formatting, could you please fix the code so that everything isn't bolded? You can bold the categories, i.e. 'Bloodline,' 'Hair Color,' etc.

Please expand the 'Brief Childhood History' section to at least three paragraphs. I'd like to know more about Miriam's childhood experiences. As a cautionary note, remember she won't be able to actively study the dark arts at Hogwarts because those books are in the restricted section and that requires admin approval. ^^

For the final touch, make sure you use the spell check tool. When you're done, change the 'pending' to 'edited' and it will be looked at ASAP!

Offline Eris

Re: Miriam Milea - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 19 Dec 2010, 12:24 pm »
Thank you for editing so quickly!  It's great to see someone interested in getting involved soon. :D

Unfortunately, Ravenclaw house is currently closed, so you have two options:

1. Be placed on the waiting list for Ravenclaw, and if it doesn't open within two weeks get sorted into an open house.

2. Be sorted into a different house now.  The only open one currently is Hufflepuff, so you should change your character sheet to match this, if that's where you choose for Miriam to be.

Please reply here with your choice, and hopefully Miriam will be an active student on our board soon. XD Welcome again!

Offline Miriam Milea

Re: Miriam Milea - Pending
« Reply #3 on: 19 Dec 2010, 01:41 pm »
I'll wait if that's alright :)
Maybe I exist, to find out why I exist

Offline Eris

Re: Miriam Milea - Approved [R]
« Reply #4 on: 20 Dec 2010, 12:30 pm »
WELCOME TO HOGWARTS!
Sharp-witted, oh yes
and wise by far.
I see you'd do well in...
RAVENCLAW!