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Michael Batalia - Waiting [R-2]
« on: 19 Feb 2012, 09:04 am »
First and Last Name:Michael Batalia
Bloodline: Muggleborn
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Olive
General Build: average
Height: tall
Birthplace: Camden, London
Brief Childhood History: Was born in Camden. Although his parents were muggles, magic had always been intertwined in his family. His older brother is in his 5th year at Hogwarts and his uncle is a wizard, there are also other ancestors that were also magical, but none of them are alive now. Ever since they were children, his parents knew that he and his brother were magical, although they decided that they would not tell them until the day they were excepted into Hogwarts.
As a young kid, he often hung out with his brother, as he noticed that the other kids were different, although he didn't know why. When his brother one day received his invitation to Hogwarts. He was told, by his parents, that he too has magical abilities. Michael was overjoyed and from then on he slowly counted off the days until he too would get a letter from Hogwarts.
After he found out why he was different from other people, he was able to make friends more easily. He only met with his friends after school, since he was home-schooled by his mom. His dad taught Math and Chemistry at a public High school. Michael always loved to do logical puzzles with his dad when he came home from work.
Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Although he does not like to be a leader, he has a strong character and isn't pushed around. He has a logical mind that helps him get good grades. Michael often cares about others and likes to make new friends. He is quite athletic and loves to show off his reflexes and athleticism when he plays goalkeeper with his friends when playing soccer. He loves to learn knew things and how things work together. He has always had a great love for living things and is fascinated by nature.
Michael is good at Charms, Defence against Dark Arts, Potions, Arithmancy, Muggle Studies, Flying.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Michael hates to memorize, which is why is good at analytical subjects, but hates history and social studies.  He can be too lazy when not motivated. Unfortunately, He has a tendency to be thick-skulled. He doesn't have much knowledge about things that don't matter to him. He doesn't even know who the queen of England is now.
Michael is bad at Astronomy, History of Magic, Herbology, Divination
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Even though his brother is in Gryffindor, Michael thinks he should be in Ravenclaw. He loves to learn new things and hangout with people from whom he can learn even more. His logical mind allows him get good grades, without having to study for long hours.
« Last Edit: 09 Mar 2012, 04:03 pm by Jayce »

Offline Jayce

Re: Michael Batalia
« Reply #1 on: 19 Feb 2012, 03:45 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can get you sorted, there are a few things to attend to.

So I am a bit confused as to how the magical blood runs through Camden's family. You say he and his brother come from two muggles, but their uncle is a wizard. It's quite rare to see so many magical people come from a muggle family, unless perhaps some ancestor of theirs was magical or a grandparent was muggleborn, which would then make the idea of one sibling being magical and the other not be more believable.

And at HPRPG, we like to keep a light atmosphere and try to keep away from naming specific disorders, like dysgraphia. You're free to still have Camden display the symptoms, but not necessarily diagnose it.

Once you've fixed all of that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Michael Batalia - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 09 Mar 2012, 04:03 pm »
Ravenclaw house is currently closed at the moment. You will be placed on the waiting list, but if at any point you decide you would like your character to be in another house, just edit the sheet accordingly and reply here.

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski