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Luke Griffiths - Approved [S]
« on: 18 Feb 2012, 05:06 am »
First and Last name: Luke Griffiths

Bloodline: Pure
Hair Colour: Light brown
Eye Colour: Dark blue
General build: Average
Height: Tall

Birthplace: Caerphilly, Wales
Brief childhood history: Luke was born in a 3 bedroom house in Caerphilly. He grew up with his younger sister and his parents have always been on his side. He has had quite a average bringing up. He always knew he was a pureblood and would one day receive the letter from Hogwarts. His father was a Slytherin and never brought up the fact he was a pureblood when he was in Hogwarts, he never rubbed it into anyone's face and made friends with others who weren't pureblood. Luke's mother was a Gryffindor who was a year younger than Adam (Luke's father) was also a pureblood and didn't feel the need to brag. A couple of years after graduating from Hogwarts Adam and Vanessa (Luke's mother) came together.

Soon they were married and had a son, then named him Luke after Adam's father. Luke was a totally different person from his mother and father, he always took pride in being a pureblood even bragged about it. Since birth he was a selfish, short-tempered boy and when Luke was 3 he had a sister named Laura. Even though Luke hated nearly everyone he always showed love and care for his younger sister.

Then as he slowly grew up the letter arrived...

Strengths (At least three, including Personality and Academic): Luke from a young age found creating things very interesting, he would always when have the chance go put some of the kitchen ingredients together and then try them, which was mostly followed by him being sick. When Luke heard about Hogwarts and all the subjects he began to imagine a big rusty castle with tall, strict old men with canes walking around. Luke knew he would enjoy potions as he had always had a passion for mixing and brewing. Luke has not just been creative but has also been quite sporty and has always loved watching and playing quidditch, as Luke enjoys zooming in the air at a very fast speed trying not crash in a tree  whilst being chased by a round, hard ball called a bludger. When I comes to personality Luke have never been the sweet talking sot guy, he has always been a hot-head. Most of the time if he see's something he doesn't like, he'll go argue about it. If he see's someone doing something wrong, he will go argue about it. But the good thing is he never falls flat in a argument, he just shouts louder.

Weaknesses (At least three, including Personality and Academic): Even though Luke enjoys mixing and creating he can't read a book about the past or about someone. Luke has always seemed to find books boring and time-wasting as in all that time he could be pulling a prank. Luke has tried many times to try and read a whole book once on goblins but fell asleep halfway through the third page. Luke understood that most subjects in Hogwarts would require to read a book, including History of Magic. Luke didn't know what it was about the sound of he subject but it felt like being trapped in cave with a ton of books. He couldn't even stand listening about it. Luke also finds it quite hard to get along with others and if they don't share the same hobbies and stuff, he'll just leave without saying goodbye. This would probably also depend on his mood, if Luke's happy he'll be able to make many friends. If Luke's angry he'll probably make about 4 enemies.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I think Luke belongs in Slytherin because he is a quite sly and cunning person who likes to argue and brag about his blood status.


« Last Edit: 09 Mar 2012, 03:52 pm by Jayce »

Offline Tany

Re: Luke Griffiths
« Reply #1 on: 18 Feb 2012, 09:09 am »
Heya Luke and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need editing/explaining. First, in his history, the mention of the pensieve seems a bit... random. Pensieves actually aren't all that common to come by, after all, and Luke peering into one just to see one of his cousins die and then be afraid to look at one again is somewhat, well, odd. :lol: Unless his cousin's death is really important or something, I suggest removing it completely or coming up with another way he found out about the news, sans pensieve. ;3

Secondly, you don't have to specify which of his weaknesses are the first, second, and third. We're looking for it to be done in a paragraph manner, rather than somewhat listed like that.

And lastly we really only need why Slytherin is a good house for him, so you don't need to worry about adding in why he's not a good candidate for Hufflepuff. (Or you could keep it an add in why he's not good for Gryffindor or Ravenclaw, too, you know?) <3

Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

Offline Tany

Re: Luke Griffiths - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 19 Feb 2012, 07:35 am »
Thank you for editing~! :biglove:

Unfortunately, Slytherin house is currently closed, so I'm going to go ahead and pop Luke on the waiting list! If, at any time during your wait, you feel you could see Luke in another house feel free to edit the sheet accordingly and poke us here!

Offline Jayce

Re: Luke Griffiths - Waiting [S-2]
« Reply #3 on: 09 Mar 2012, 03:52 pm »
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