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Catherine Gregory

Catherine Gregory - Denied
« on: 18 Dec 2011, 06:16 pm »
First and Last Name: Catherine "Katie" Gregory



Bloodline: Half Blood
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Blue
General Build: Petite
Height: Small



Birthplace: Bradford, West Yorkshire, England
Brief Childhood History: Katie was born in Bradford. She grew up on a normal street with normal people. She was raised mainly by her Dad's Dad, due to the unfortunate hours her parents worked at the Ministry and Daily prophet respectively.

Katie was especially close to her sister Harriet before she went to Hogwarts, but soon realised afterwards that Harriet was not the kind of person to like so much. She also had two other sisters, Bep and Andi and with a heavily pregnant mum, that number was about to stretch to three.

At School, Katie was very different from her twin, Bep. She displayed great intelligence though never bragged, she just had her one friend, Nat and they were sort of loners (despite the fact there was two of them) unlike Bep who did brag from time to time about her amazing feats and had many friends. Katie left school with very good SATs. Though good at muggle things, Katie could not wait to go Hogwarts, unlike her sister.



Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Katie, overall, is a very nice person, being kind and considerate most of the time, but mainly she is very intelligent, focused and ambitious, that is her true nature, if she has to sacrifice being nice for learning something new, she will. Due to intelligent nature, her best lessons include Astronomy, Transfiguration and Charms.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Most importantly, Katie is very, very shy and will not like to talk to people who she does not know and is not very open with her friends who she is very close to and Katie isn’t very brave, she is cowardly at times and rarely isn’t. When it comes to lessons, Katie is good at most. But she lacks natural ability in some, including Defence Against the Dark Arts (namely, DADA), Divination and flying lessons, due to the fact that she cannot ride a broom. Though, she does read a lot of books to try to change this, but fails when it comes to practical work.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Ravenclaw, because she is very smart and probably doesn’t belong in any other house.
« Last Edit: 03 Jan 2012, 07:27 pm by Jayce »

Offline Jayce

Re: Catherine Gregory - Pending [PM]
« Reply #1 on: 18 Dec 2011, 07:13 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG!

There are just a few things that need editing before we can get you sorted. Right now the strengths portion of the sheet seems more list-like. If you could expand on the characteristics you've given and explain why, that would be great. You'll also need to provide classes that Katie would struggle with in the weaknesses section.

Once you've done that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Catherine Gregory - Pending [PM]
« Reply #2 on: 19 Dec 2011, 03:58 pm »
Right now the strengths portion of the sheet seems more list-like. If you could expand on the characteristics you've given and explain why, that would be great.

Just change the title again when you're done.

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Offline Jayce

Re: Catherine Gregory - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 03 Jan 2012, 07:27 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski