Topic: Luke Valhoun - Denied

[Luke Valhoun]

First and Last Name: Luke Valhoun
Bloodline: Half-Blood
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Hazel
General Build: Average
Height: Average
Birthplace: Little Whinging
Brief Childhood History: Luke was born on the 10th of November in Little Whinging. He would live all of his life in what he considered to be a boring town until he recieved his letter from Hogwarts. His dad was a wizard from a poor known family and possessed little magic skills other then a profficiency with care of magical creatures. His mum baked cakes and assorted goods for the various bakeries around town.

It is unknown how she excepted marrying a wizard. Luke lived a secluded life in the small town where there were very few kids his age. He looks forward to attending Hogwarts.
Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Luke aspires to become a dueling champion, because of this, he has taken a shining to both Charms and Defence Against the Dark Arts. Aspiring to score profficiently in both. Because he has had a small amount of friends previously he finds it easy to concentrate and accomplish things on his own. However, his need for attention and friendship has caused him to become very attatched and loyal to the friends he does have. He will go to extraordinary lengths to protect his small group of friends, willing to put his life on the line.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Luke is often shy around females and popular students due to his poor social life as a child.  School is yet to start however Luke already feels a slight disdain towards Herbology and Potions because of his lack of motivation for the subject's. He also lacks slightly in the theory section of subjects while he excels in the practical form. This can be contributed to his love for Dueling, Charms and Defence Against the Dark Arts.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I believe that Luke could easily fit into either Gryffindor or Hufflepuff. Mainly because of his bravery and loyalty. However he does not consider it a big deal to his life and will be happy with whatever house he is placed in.

[Tany]

Heya Luke and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need expanding/clarifying~ First off, could you give us a bit more background about Luke? We don't get too much about him aside from his birthday, that he thought he lived in a boring town, and there were few kids his age there. What sort of things did he do growing up? For fun? Did he attend a school prior to Hogwarts, why or why not? We're just looking for a wider view of Luke's past, more about him than his parents. :3

Additionally, while Luke can be both a good candidate for Gryffindor and Hufflepuff, we ask that you, as his driver, pick which you think would be best for him in the long run in term of character development!

Once you've made the above edits just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

[Jayce]

As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes!