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Clare Turner

Clare Turner - Approved [S]
« on: 18 Nov 2011, 06:19 pm »
First and Last Name: Clare Turner

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Bloodline: Pureblood
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Hazel
General Build: average
Height: average
Birthplace: London, England

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Brief Childhood History: To be brief, Clare was born in London on January 7th. She was born to Elizabeth and Charles Turner. She lived in Turner Manor on a country side. She wasn't spoiled exactly, but she could OFTEN times get what she wanted.
She grew up with a great knowledge of magic beginning at a very young age. Her father is in the ministry and her mother writes books. They were not shy about magic. She has a sister about a year from her. She also has a cat that she has had since she was young.
Even though Clare knew from a young age that she had powers, she knew not to use them in front of muggles. She grew up going to a private school that was muggles. Her parents wanting her going to a school that would be only witches and wizards, but Clare wanted to go to a regular school. She just wanted to blend in. Sometimes she felt kind of odd and just wanted to be "normal". It was just a phase. Clare didn't try and really get close to anyone during her childhood, but she did have one close friend named Becky. Clare is very close with her, but has not told Becky that she is magical. She feels guilty, but doesn't want to share her secret.

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Strengths (At least three, including Personality and Academic):
Clare considers her strengths to be the fact that she is very good at school, when she applies herself. She is good at charms and potions. Some things she has to study to be good at, but these subjects just come naturally to her. Clare is very funny and clever, which in her mind is a strength. She uses her sarcasm to try and be funny, not mean. Although, most people take it as mean. Clare generally knows what she wants. She isn't always indecisive about things. Even if she doesn't always know, she just decides and thinks of the outcome later.

Weaknesses (At least three, including Personality and Academic):
Clare considers her weaknesses to be the fact that she often talks and thinks herself in circles. It's really because she thinks too much. She over analyzes. She's not very good at history of magic. Mainly because she can't stay focused on it. Unless it is something she is very interested in. She just basically finds history boring. She can RARELY get into it.She also care too much. Like, when it comes to constructive criticism, she takes it personally. She doesn't get mad, she just takes it as a challenge.


What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:
Clare feels she would do good in Slytherin. She is cunning, clever, and determined. She likes to get what she wants. She's not cold, but she can be closed off and secluded at times.
« Last Edit: 21 Nov 2011, 07:59 pm by Jayce »

Offline Tany

Re: Clare Turner
« Reply #1 on: 19 Nov 2011, 04:04 pm »
Heya Clare and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need expanding. ^^~ I know we ask for a brief childhood history, but I'm actually going to have to ask that you give us a bit more of Clare's childhood. We're actually looking for more about Clare, after all~ Did she attend a school prior to Hogwarts, what sort of things did she do for fun, did she have any friends, and so on. Feel free to check out some approved sheets for a better idea. ;3

Also, and this isn't really anything big, but make sure you're not hitting the 'enter' button unless you're separating paragraphs. ^^; Like, in her strengths and weaknesses for example, all of that could be one large paragraph rather than a few sentences and then a wonky space.

Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

Clare Turner

Re: Clare Turner - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 21 Nov 2011, 07:47 pm »
Okay thank you! I made some changes. Please let me know if it's okay!

Offline Jayce

Re: Clare Turner - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 21 Nov 2011, 07:59 pm »
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