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Poppy LaemonLime - Approved [R]
« on: 01 Nov 2011, 03:57 pm »
First and Last Name: Poppy LaemonLime

Bloodline: Half-Blood
Hair Color: Strawberry-Blond
Eye Color: Green
General Build: Average
Height: Tall

Birthplace: Nottingham, England

Brief Childhood History:
Poppy LaemonLime, child of Halsey and Wolcott LaemonLime, has an older brother, Colson, who is blind. Colson did not get a letter to Hogwarts for he was born with no magic. Her father, being a wizard, is comfortable using magic freely throughout the house. Poppy has known about the existence of magic ever since she could understand things. Her mother has always known about magic but is not a witch; she is a squib.

She and her brother are very close. They would do everything together and share knowledge with each other. Poppy even learned how to read Braille.

Poppy acted much like a muggle in her early years. She attended her towns Nursery and Community school. She was the average student, ranging from a low B to a low A. She hung out with her muggle friends during the weekdays and, when she turned 9, was a mother’s helper over the weekends (A mother’s helper is when the mother is at home while you take care of the children).


Strengths (Including Personality and Academic):
Poppy is a very talented transfiguration student. The idea of changing an object mesmerizes her. Her father once turned her stuffed animal cat into a live one.

Care of Magical Creatures is another one of her best class. When she was little she would “borrow” her father’s books about them. She would memorize every page and surprise her parents every night about some facts about a creature.

She is quite the dedicated student and will always work hard. Making and keeping friends is a helpful trait of hers for she is never alone. She is a strong willed girl, though she doesn’t show it often, and an individual.

Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic):
Poppy strongly dislikes and is not very good at divination. She doesn’t like to “see the future” for she wants everything a surprise waiting to happen. The teacher is quite strange for her taste, as well as her not liking the class.

Poppy is the type of girl to get upset easily, which always gets her in trouble. She is not good at handling peer pressure, and witty remarks are not part of her. She is scared of standing up for herself and others for the consequences always look worse than the current state.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:
Poppy is an intelligent and wise girl. She wants to be an individual with her own style. Creativity and hard working is what she is. She is always loyal to her friends and family. Poppy would be best in Ravenclaw.
« Last Edit: 03 Nov 2011, 03:15 pm by Tany »

Offline Tany

Re: Poppy LaemonLime
« Reply #1 on: 01 Nov 2011, 10:01 pm »
Heya Poppy and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need expanding. First, could you give us a bit more about Poppy's history? Like, did she attend a school prior to Hogwarts, did she have any friends, what did she do for fun, how was she raised? Feel free to look at some approved sheets for a better idea of what we're looking for here. ^^

Additionally, her strengths and weaknesses look pretty good, but perhaps you could add in a few 'why's to it? What makes making and keeping friends a helpful trait (or a strength, rather), why isn't she the type that'd stand up for herself? That sort of thing.

And lastly, you state that she has both Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff qualities, which is fine, but we need you to specify which one you think she'd fit in more (which house do you think, in the long run, would help Poppy the best with development) when it comes to sorting.

Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited' and we'll continue from there.

Offline Tany

Re: Poppy LaemonLime - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 02 Nov 2011, 05:10 pm »
Thank you for editing~! :biglove:

Unfortunately, Hufflepuff house is currently closed until the numbers of the houses even out a bit, so I'm going to go ahead and put Poppy on the waiting list. If, at any time during your wait, you feel you could see Poppy in another house, feel free to edit your sheet accordingly and poke us here. <3

Re: Poppy LaemonLime - Waiting [H-1]
« Reply #3 on: 02 Nov 2011, 07:07 pm »
Ok! I changed the last bit!!! ;)

Offline Tany

Re: Poppy LaemonLime - Waiting [H-1]
« Reply #4 on: 03 Nov 2011, 03:15 pm »
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