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Adrian White - Approved [R]
« on: 03 Oct 2011, 12:11 pm »
First and Last Name: Adrian White

Bloodline: Pureblooded
Hair Color:Light Brown
Eye Color:blue
General Build: Average
Height: Average

Birthplace: Dublin, Ireland
Brief Childhood History:
Adrian is from a pureblooded family living in a small castle like mansion just outside Dublin, he was born there, into a rich family and a big family, Adrian got two sisters there already have finished Hogwarts, named Julie and Sasha (Julie 20, Sasha 23). Adrian Was born into a spoiled family there did not have much contact with the muggle world. meaning Adrian did not leave the mansion ground the first part of his life, which have resulted in a safe environment to grow up in. But due to the fact he was not allowed to leave the mansion in fear of the muggles would get a notion of his and his families magic, he got first of all bored by living there, it was a big place but at some point even the biggest place gets to common and boring, it was at his point Adrian started his adventuring, he would sneak of the ground to go walk in the forest around the house, not more then a hour at the time, else his parents would get worried, but with an hour away he could always just tell them he had been in some remote part of the mansion ground. When he was not sneaking out Adrian used as much time as he could with his sisters, mostly just listening to the stories of Hogwarts when they where home. and After they finished school he would listen to there stories of there jobs. at the age of nine Adrian started to read for fun, just to spend time, and it was at this time he found his joy in reading, he would spend hours and hours in the family library which contained more then 300 books, everything from old school books to muggle stories.  

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic):
Adrian is a patient guy, he like to read and have a way of wanting things to be "perfect", he have a solid grasp how to focus on homework and he really like to do it. In terms of classes his best classes is going to be Defends Against the Dark Arts and Potions. He love the perfection you need in potions, and he is a quick thinker.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic):
One of Adrian's strength is also from time to time a weakness, his way of wanting things to be perfect, it can result in him starting over and over and over again on projects if he is not happy with the results. Besides that Adrian don't like to sit still to much at the time, and he is not a sports person, he have a small fear of Heights, which will make Flying is worst class by far, and History of Magic, since he don't find what happened interesting he is more focused on the present.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:
Adrian is in my eyes a Ravenclaw student, he focus allot on his homework, and it is important to him that he gets good grades to make his family proud, if not Ravenclaw then he is Hufflepuff, he is a loyal friend if you prove your self to him, and a patient friend there always will have time to help people with there homework. But when it comes to it, he is Ravenclaw by heart.
« Last Edit: 06 Oct 2011, 09:19 pm by Jayce »

Offline Tany

Re: Adrian White
« Reply #1 on: 03 Oct 2011, 02:49 pm »
Heya Adrian and welcome (back) to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, there are a few things that need editing. ^^ First, in his history, we don't get too much background on Adrian other than the knowledge that he spent all his time at the mansion. Was he homeschooled, did he do anything for fun? What was his life like, stuck at the mansion all the time?

Additionally, there are a handful of words you've capitalized that don't require capitalization. ^^; Maybe run the sheet through a spell-check to try and clean up any grammar issues? <3

Once you've done that just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited' and we'll continue from there.

Re: Adrian White - Pending
« Reply #2 on: 03 Oct 2011, 10:27 pm »
Hey Tanny and thank you for the warm welcome, I added some about what he have been doing, and removed allot of the capitalizing. kept it on names and Classes and so on. but should not be any more random capitalizing.

Offline Jayce

Re: Adrian White - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 06 Oct 2011, 09:19 pm »
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