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Saga Castell - Approved [R]
« on: 28 Jul 2011, 12:24 am »
First and Last Name: Saga Unity Castell
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Bloodline: Half-blood
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Blue
General Build: Petite
Height: Average
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Birthplace: London
Brief Childhood History:
Saga was born in London to her pureblood mother Melynda and muggle-born father Ralph. Very soon they decided to move into a smaller town in Somerset, named Clevedon, in order to give their daughter more idyllic and tranquil place to grow up. Besides, with family's average income it came too expensive to live in London. After moving, Mrs. Castell opened her own flower shop, and what comes to Mr. Castell, he continued working under The Muggle-Worthy Excuse Committee in the Ministry.

Her parents thought it will be better for their daughter to be home-schooled, so Saga never went to Muggle school. Anyhow, it was important to her know both Muggle-world and wizarding world, since she was going to grow in a neighborhood full of Muggles and later be educated in Hogwarts and through that properly join the magical community. When she was little, she had both Muggles and wizards / witches as her friends, with whom she played in the neighborhood, in the parks and on the beach. Later on she also loved helping her mother in the florist's.

Saga first time expressed magical abilities when she was nine. She managed to fly bunch of flowers somehow to vase, without concentrating or even showing any consideration to do so. Her parents were proud, of course, and it was then clear she would get an invitation to the Hogwarts few years later. When the invitation came, they went to the Diagon Alley and bought everything Saga would need at her first year. She even got the Ural Owl, which she named Elpis. It quickly became a very important pet and a friend to her.

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Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Saga is clever and smart girl, but she really prefers practice to theory – she uses her energy rather doing than reading (She DO like reading, but mainly just for fun). That's why she'll be great at Herbology and Care of Magical Creatures – and of course she'll have some advantage at Muggle Studies for living with one muggle-born guardian, too.
Otherwise, Saga is a kind and polite girl, who's always there to help a friend – and she's loyal too. She often quickly has answers for some problems that need to be solved. Also she's patient and won't lose her nerves too swiftly.
 
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): She's not interested in any class with too much little facts, for example years, to remember. That's why she's poor with History of Magic and Ancient Runes, etc. Saga's not also very keen on Potions.
By personality her weaknesses are little shyness at first and later on being maybe too polite. Sometimes it's just so hard to say “no”. Saga also suffers claustrophobia, since she got accidentally trapped into family's narrow ground-cellar when she was seven.

What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I feel Saga belongs in Ravenclaw, because of her personality. She is smart and comes easy with solving some arising problems. She could be in Hufflepuff too, but she prefers more Ravenclaw herself, since her mother was in it too and Saga feels like it could be great place for her too.

(It's OK for me to wait for a free space in Ravenclaw)
« Last Edit: 28 Jul 2011, 10:35 am by Jayce »

Offline Jayce

Re: Saga Castell
« Reply #1 on: 28 Jul 2011, 09:22 am »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG!

Before we can sort you, there are just a few things to attend to.

You'll have to edit in a more realistic eye colour for Saga. Lavender is not a natural eye colour and while sometimes blue eyes can seem violet, a true purple-hue eye only occurs due to albinism.

And please go back and edit the sheet for grammar mistakes, because there are several. ;)

Once you've done all that, change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski

Re: Saga Castell - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 28 Jul 2011, 10:28 am »
Hi, I changed the color and TRIED to edit the sheet for some grammas mistakes.. I'm sorry if they still exist, English isn't my native language, so I'm not always so good at grammar. Will that be a big problem? =/

Offline Jayce

Re: Saga Castell - Edited
« Reply #3 on: 28 Jul 2011, 10:35 am »
Oh no, that's okay! Actually, for being someone who's not a native English speaker, you write it very well. There are a few issues with missing or incorrect articles (the, a, an, etc.), but for the most part, everything still reads well and makes sense. ;)

:approvedr:

Colby Lovell | Madoc Kruszewski