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Steem Marwaha

Steem Marwaha - Approved [G]
« on: 25 Jul 2011, 01:37 am »
First and Last Name: Steem Marwaha

Bloodline: Muggle-born
Hair Color: Dark Blond
Eye Color: Blue
General Build: Average
Height: Short (4'2'')

Birthplace: Luton, UK (Luton & Dunstable Hospital)
Brief Childhood History: Steem was born in the Luton & Dunstable hospital found just on the outskirts of Luton. He was pronounced healthy, and soon was taken home by his parents. Due to his parents' catholic belief, Steem was made to attend the Sacred Heart Primary School. He seemed like a normal boy to begin with, he made friends (and enemies) as well as doing well in academic studies. This all began to change one day.

Soon, and more and more frequently, Steem made strange things happen. Sometimes while he was in school, his pen would start levitating, while other times at home, homework seemed to just fly out the window. This didn't go unnoticed, and his school teachers (who were strong catholics) thought that Steem was a miracle-worker. So did his parents, until a letter from an unheard school convinced them otherwise. That school was Hogwarts.

Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Steem is Brave and Witty, making him an extremely sociable person. He has no trouble in making new friends, or persuading strangers through smooth talking. Being Muggle-born, Steem hasn't got much experience in any kind of magic, although he has found himself to be more proficient at Defence Against The Dark Arts and Charms than other subjects.

Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Steem is not without his flaws however. He can be as stubborn, and usually makes his mind up about people right away. Once his mind is made up, it is hard for anyone to change it. Steem is also reckless, he can charge into things without fully thinking of the consequences they might have. Academically, Steem finds himself struggling in the History of Magic classes, as well as Herbology, both of which he finds boring.
 
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: I feel that Steem belongs in Gryffindor, because he is brave, and willing to accomplish his goals fairly. He is reckless (as some Gryffindors are known to be) and is not afraid to stand up for what he believes in. I also feel that Steem could belong in Ravenclaw, due to his quick-thinking and wittiness. He likes studying, and doesn't shy away from a challenge.
« Last Edit: 25 Jul 2011, 02:55 pm by Tany »

Offline Tany

Re: Steem Marwaha
« Reply #1 on: 25 Jul 2011, 01:56 pm »
Heya Steem and welcome to HPRPG~!

Your application looks good, but I'm going to have to ask that you remove the bit about his homework doing itself. ^^; I know uncontrollable magic happens, but generally in the form of something moving, or exploding, or that sort of thing... not homework being done for you. That's actually not possible even when kids are able to do magic, I daresay.

Once you've done so just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'. <3

Offline Tany

Re: Steem Marwaha - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 25 Jul 2011, 02:55 pm »
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