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Alyse Sairyn

Alyse Sairyn - Approved [R]
« on: 11 Nov 2011, 05:34 pm »
First and Last Name: Alyse Sairyn

Bloodline: Half-Blood
Hair Color: Chestnut Brown
Eye Color: Green
General Build: Average
Height: Average

Birthplace: Norwich, UK
Brief Childhood History: Born as the middle child, Alyse has two siblings; an older brother and a younger sister. Her parents, happily married were average/well off in terms of financial problems because both of them had traveling jobs the children were often left in the hands of Jazmine, a family friend. Even though her parents traveled for most of the School’s terms, Alyse’s parents were always home during the summer months. On the day that she got her letter, Lenera Alyse’s mother couldn’t help but throw a small celebration party.

Growing up, Alyse had a fairly normal “muggle” life. Jazmine, a muggle-born witch fully believed in education before even Hogwarts and sent the children to a school for basic learning. Magic was always a big part of her life however, from Jazmine using magic to help her cooking or something simple like mail by owl the children were always exposed to the wonders of magic.


Strengths (Including Personality and Academic): Alyse is a witty young witch, she’s quite good at Transfiguration and History of Magic. With a fair memory and slightly higher then average sense of organization Alyse isn’t exactly terrible at potions either.  She’s a bit quiet but can always offer a bit of good advice when some one needs it.
Weaknesses (Including Personality and Academic): Not being very bold, Alyse has a hard time with Defense against the Dark Arts. Faced with things she’s scared or unsure of, Alyse tends to freeze and become lost as to what to do. Flying is pretty much a no go for her, she’s terrified of heights and anything that has to do with beating quaffles around.
What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why: Ravenclaw, Alyse is more of a studier then anything else. She’s not bold like the Gryffindor nor is she exactly outgoing like the Hufflepuff but she’s still very loyal. When Alyse really makes a friend its typically for a life time.  
« Last Edit: 15 Nov 2011, 08:45 pm by Tany »

Offline Tany

Re: Alyse Sairyn
« Reply #1 on: 14 Nov 2011, 09:59 pm »
Heya Alyse and welcome to HPRPG~!

However, before we can sort you, I'm going to have to ask that you fix the punctuation in her history. ^^ There's quite an overload of semi-colons where they don't belong and would be better as commas in most instances. ;3

Additionally, Ravenclaw house is currently closed, so once you've made the above edit I'm going to go ahead and pop you on the waiting list. ^^

Once you've said change just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.

Alyse Sairyn

Re: Alyse Sairyn - Edited
« Reply #2 on: 15 Nov 2011, 04:45 pm »
I think I got em all out. Sorry about that, bad with commas and such.

Offline Tany

Re: Alyse Sairyn - Waiting [R-1]
« Reply #3 on: 15 Nov 2011, 08:45 pm »
:approvedr: