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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Castiel Riley - Waiting [S-1]
« Last post by Sue on 14 Feb 2012, 08:22 pm »
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Character sheet
« Last post by Tany on 14 Feb 2012, 03:03 pm »Heya Mia and welcome to HPRPG~!
First and foremost, although I've changed it for you, keep in mind that you ought to have titled the sheet with your character's name. :3 Most tutorials you go through on the site and things of that nature will also require the title to be your character's name, rather than the name of the form in question. <3
Onto the sheet! I feel you've got a really good basic outline right now, but I'd actually like a bit more- I don't feel we learn too much about Mia in her history aside from her love of visiting places and reading-- could you give us a bit more into her childhood? What sort of things did she do for fun; did she have any friends; maybe why her parents had her attend a public school (or private?) prior to Hogwarts, since one of her parents is magical...?
Same with her strengths and weaknesses-- why is she good at being calm in 'situations', why is being loud a weakness, and so on. Give us some insight to the strengths and weaknesses you chose for Mia.
Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.
First and foremost, although I've changed it for you, keep in mind that you ought to have titled the sheet with your character's name. :3 Most tutorials you go through on the site and things of that nature will also require the title to be your character's name, rather than the name of the form in question. <3
Onto the sheet! I feel you've got a really good basic outline right now, but I'd actually like a bit more- I don't feel we learn too much about Mia in her history aside from her love of visiting places and reading-- could you give us a bit more into her childhood? What sort of things did she do for fun; did she have any friends; maybe why her parents had her attend a public school (or private?) prior to Hogwarts, since one of her parents is magical...?
Same with her strengths and weaknesses-- why is she good at being calm in 'situations', why is being loud a weakness, and so on. Give us some insight to the strengths and weaknesses you chose for Mia.
Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Castiel Riley
« Last post by Tany on 14 Feb 2012, 02:59 pm »Heya Castiel and welcome to HPRPG~!
Unfortunately, Slytherin house is currently closed, so we're going to pop you on the waiting list. If, at any time during your wait, you feel you could see Castiel in another house simply edit the sheet accordingly and poke us here! :3
Unfortunately, Slytherin house is currently closed, so we're going to pop you on the waiting list. If, at any time during your wait, you feel you could see Castiel in another house simply edit the sheet accordingly and poke us here! :3
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Mia Moss
« Last post by Tany on 14 Feb 2012, 02:58 pm »Heya Mia and welcome to HPRPG~!
However, before we can sort you, we're going to have to ask that you give us a bit more into her history and write it in paragraph form without the continued spacing between sentences. :3 We're looking for more about Mia, mind, so while the information about her seemingly neglectful parents and nanny are nice fillers, we still want the majority to be about how Mia grew up and how her childhood was.
Additionally, with the strengths and weaknesses, make those paragraphs as well. Perhaps even give us some why behind them? Why is she strong-willed, independent, ambitious, and a perfectionist? Why is the cold, and evil, and hard to handle? Do you think 'evil' might be too big a word for an eleven year old girl? ;3
Lastly, we need a reason why she belongs in Slytherin. You gave us a reason for Ravenclaw, but... well, we need one for the house you're chosing, too. <3
Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.
However, before we can sort you, we're going to have to ask that you give us a bit more into her history and write it in paragraph form without the continued spacing between sentences. :3 We're looking for more about Mia, mind, so while the information about her seemingly neglectful parents and nanny are nice fillers, we still want the majority to be about how Mia grew up and how her childhood was.
Additionally, with the strengths and weaknesses, make those paragraphs as well. Perhaps even give us some why behind them? Why is she strong-willed, independent, ambitious, and a perfectionist? Why is the cold, and evil, and hard to handle? Do you think 'evil' might be too big a word for an eleven year old girl? ;3
Lastly, we need a reason why she belongs in Slytherin. You gave us a reason for Ravenclaw, but... well, we need one for the house you're chosing, too. <3
Once you've made the above changes just swap the title from 'pending' to 'edited'.
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Scarlett Clark - Waiting [G-1]
« Last post by Tany on 14 Feb 2012, 02:51 pm »
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Jessarie Johnson - Edited
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Ginger Leconnell - Revised
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Cathryn Byrd - Edited
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Ginger Eliason - Edited
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Riley Blare - Waiting [R-1]
« Last post by Tany on 14 Feb 2012, 02:47 pm »