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First and Last Name: Willow (Willa) Teldrassil



Bloodline: Pureblood
Hair Color: Dark chestnut-aubergine blend
Eye Color:  Light fern-green
General Build: Petite
Height: Medium



Birthplace: Donegal, Ireland

Brief Childhood History:

Growing up along side the sprawling grassy hills of Ireland had a calming influence on Willa. She would spend much of her days watching clouds float by and rolling about in the long grasses. Her mother and father own a Flower and Garden supply shop where they sell quite an eclectic variety of many things from toadstools to Dragon dung. Willa has always had a special relationship with her parents. They all share a fondness of plants. To those who are unfamiliar with the Teldrassils, they may seem a bit odd, but once befriended they are the kindest people one may meet.

Willa is an only child but was never lonely thanks to her active imagination.  Each and every insect or creature that was fortunate enough to cross her path became a participant in her play.

The closest thing Willa has ever had to a sister would be her pet toad, Ivy. Willa became enchanted with Ivy due to the bright pink streaks on the toad's back -- Willa had never seen such a thing! At first Willa's playful nature caused Ivy to keep her distance, but after a few months, trust was found leaving Willa and Ivy inseparable. You'll almost certainly see Ivy hanging out on Willa's shoulder or even on top of her head!



Strengths (At least three, including Personality and Academic):

Willa has a real knack with plants and fungi. She can make almost anything grow and calm even the most temperamental plant. Willa is very friendly and loyal, she has a very kind and genuine heart. Aside from Herbology, Willa will also be very good at Care of Magical Creatures due to her love of animals as well as Muggle studies. She finds Muggles quite fascinating (being that she's never really met any) and is almost as curious about them as she is about plants!

Weaknesses (At least three, including Personality and Academic):

Other than Herbology, Care for Magical Creatures, and Muggle Studies, Willa could really care less about school. She'd much rather be exploring the forbidden forest for rare and exotic plants she has yet to encounter! However, this is unlikely to happen due to that fact that she is too afraid to break any rules. Willa is a bit of scaredy-cat and is much more comfortable acting out in her imagination. It is likely that her grades will suffer due to her stares out of classroom windows. Willa will do dreadfully in Defense Against the Dark Arts and History of Magic.



What House You Feel Your Character Belongs In and Why:

Hufflepuff. Being that this house is associated with the element of earth, Willa should be put here since she has such a connection with soil. Willa's easygoingness and loyalty also qualify the house.

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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Electra Lightning - Pending
« Last post by Jayce on 19 Feb 2012, 04:07 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Sal Tree - Pending
« Last post by Jayce on 19 Feb 2012, 04:06 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Jude Rask - Pending
« Last post by Jayce on 19 Feb 2012, 04:05 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Aria Davidson - Pending
« Last post by Jayce on 19 Feb 2012, 04:04 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Skylark Cloud-Pending
« Last post by Jayce on 19 Feb 2012, 04:03 pm »
As it's been over two weeks since we've last asked you to make changes, I'm going to deny this character sheet for now. Please feel free to post your sheet again at a later date with the requested changes! ;)
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Gage Parker
« Last post by Jayce on 19 Feb 2012, 04:02 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG!

Alright, just a few things to get to here. While it's great that Nathan is a nice guy, the way you currently have this worded in the weakness section, makes it come across as if you're godmodding. You can't control how other characters perceive and react to Nathan. So instead of saying 'they realize he's a nice guy', it's better to state it more openly as 'he can be found to be a nice guy'.

Once you've fixed that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!

And on an added note, you seem to be placing two spaces after every period in your paragraphs. While it's not technically anything wrong, I just wanted to make the observation that it seems to be rather visually jarring. Mainly because the particular font we use on the board actually has quite the wide spacing to begin with.
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Roxanne Henry
« Last post by Jayce on 19 Feb 2012, 03:50 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG!

So everything looks pretty good. You just need to use one of the three adjectives provided for you on the Official Character Sheet to fill in the 'General Build' section. There are also several grammatical errors in the sheet, so if you could just go over it and fix them up, that would be great.

Once you've fixed all of that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Michael Batalia
« Last post by Jayce on 19 Feb 2012, 03:45 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can get you sorted, there are a few things to attend to.

So I am a bit confused as to how the magical blood runs through Camden's family. You say he and his brother come from two muggles, but their uncle is a wizard. It's quite rare to see so many magical people come from a muggle family, unless perhaps some ancestor of theirs was magical or a grandparent was muggleborn, which would then make the idea of one sibling being magical and the other not be more believable.

And at HPRPG, we like to keep a light atmosphere and try to keep away from naming specific disorders, like dysgraphia. You're free to still have Camden display the symptoms, but not necessarily diagnose it.

Once you've fixed all of that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!
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The Sorting Hat (aka Character Sheets) / Re: Sierra Hazlewood
« Last post by Jayce on 19 Feb 2012, 03:35 pm »
Hi there! Welcome to HPRPG! Before we can get you sorted, there are a few things to attend to.

In an effort to keep all the sheets clean and uniform, I'm going to have to stress that your entries for each particular section only pertain the necessary information. So 'Bloodline' should just say 'Pureblood', 'Hair Color' should be 'blonde', and 'Birthplace' should just be a city and country, at most. You will also need to use one of the three adjectives provided for you on the Official Character Sheet to fill in the 'general build' and 'height' sections.

While it's true that we ask for a brief childhood history, the official sheet also states that we require at least a solid 2-3 paragraphs. So go ahead and tell us a bit more about Sierra. Some areas you could expand on are her prior schooling, childhood friends, relationship with her parents, etc.

And finally, you seem to have placed Sierra's academic weakness in the strengths section and haven't named an academic strength.

Once you've fixed all of that, just change the title from 'pending' to 'edited'!
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